[Kmymoney-devel] Announcement draft

[Colin]

On Wednesday December 23 2009 06:17 am Alvaro Soliverez wrote:
> Here is a new draft, based on your feedback. I also added links to
> Userbase and Techbase. Techbase will have the installation
> instructions and technical requirements. I will work on that these
> days.
> 
> 
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> ...
> One major change which may not be visible is our move to a tighter
> integration with KDE. All of the development effort was done in the
> KDE SVN, and in coordination with the relevant KDE teams. We believe
> this move has been beneficial for both KMyMoney and KDE and will make
> integration tighter in the future.
>...

How about...

One major change which may not be visible is our move to the KDE SVN.  All of 
the development effort was done there, and in coordination with the relevant 
KDE teams. We believe this move has been beneficial for both KMyMoney and KDE 
and will make integration tighter in the future.

(Avoiding the repeated "tighter integration").

Thanks,

Colin Wright