errors in http://www.kde.org/support/

[Itai Seggev]

On Mon, 28 Jul 2003, Chris Howells wrote:

> > 5) In the first sentence of "Sponsoring": "could not work that well"
> > should be "could not work as well", and "on exhibitions" should be "at
> > exhibitions".
>
> Fixed, thanks.

You missed the "on" that should be changed to "at", but other than that it
looks good.

Itai

Itai Seggev, University of Chicago, Department of Physics
and retired member of the HMC CS System Staff(tm) Family.
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   <h3><a name="Money">Money</a></h3>
 
 <p>
-KDE itself may be totally free, but there are some things that it needs that require money, like hardware upgrades to servers as well as financings of regular developer meetings. One can donate money to KDE e.V. using PayPal, personal check or money transfer.
+KDE itself may be totally free, but there are some things that it needs that require money, like hardware upgrades to servers as well as financing regular developer meetings. One can donate money to KDE e.V. using PayPal, personal check or money transfer.
 </p>
 <p> [ <a href="./support.php">More information on donating money</a> | <a href="../donations.html">Past monetary donations</a> ]</p>
 
   <h3><a name="Material">Material</a></h3>
 
 <p>
-KDE would not exist without the help of many developers who work on it in their spare time. In many cases those developers are working on underpowered computing setups, especially compiling programs often takes quite some time for them, time which could be used for improving KDE instead. Support KDE by donating old or new hardware to a KDE developer near you, adopt a geek.
+KDE would not exist without the help of many developers who work on it in their spare time. In many cases these developers work on underpowered computing setups. Compiling programs often takes quite some time for them, time which could be used for improving KDE instead. Support KDE by donating old or new hardware to a KDE developer near you, in the "adopt a geek" scheme.
 </p>
 <p> [ <a href="http://devel-home.kde.org/~wheeler/adopt-a-geek/">More information on Adopt-a-Geek</a> ]</p>
 
   <h3><a name="Sponsoring">Sponsoring</a></h3>
 
 <p>
-The KDE project could not work that well as it does today without the large network infrastructure of servers and regular support for KDE booths on exhibitions sponsored by many companies and individuals. Sponsor KDE on one of the upcoming events and see you there.
+The KDE project could not work as well as it does today without the large network infrastructure of servers and regular support for KDE booths on exhibitions sponsored by many companies and individuals. You can therefore sponsor KDE at one of the upcoming events.
 </p>
 <p> [ <a href="http://events.kde.org/calendar/coming.phtml">Upcoming KDE events</a> | <a href="./thanks.php">Past and present sponsors</a> ]</p>
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ The KDE project could not work that well
 <h2><a name="Contributing">Contributing</a></h2>
 
 <p>
-Everyone can contribute to KDE, even if you little about it. In fact, some tasks may be better accomplished by those that know little about it:
+Everyone can contribute to KDE, even if you little about it. In fact, some tasks may be better accomplished by those who know little about it:
 </p>
 <p> [ <a href="#Artwork">Artwork & Icons</a> | <a href="#Enterprise">Enterprise Reports</a> | <a href="#Usability">Usability Studies</a> ]</p>