Sprint: The vision

[Thomas Pfeiffer]

On 13.04.2014 20:33, David Edmundson wrote:
> Hey all,
>
> Below is a draft of our new product vision from our discussions
> yesterday. Let me know if you have any comments.
>
>
> KDE Telepathy aims to provide Plasma users an awesome open
> communication experience that gives users a reason to switch away from
> proprietary services.

I'd replace the second "users" with "them".

> We provide rich text chat and video calls that aims to fit in
> seamlessly with the Plasma workspace and to provide sharing and
> collaboration features to KDE applications. We provide support for
> closed services such as Facebook, Steam etc. but our primary focus
> will always be on open protocols.

Remove the "to" before "provide sharing" because otherwise it would mean 
that the the rich text chat and video calls aim to provide sharing and 
collaboration features, which I don't think they do ;)

Otherwise I like it :)