Review Request 116588: Improve the README

[Martin Gräßlin]

> On March 4, 2014, 12:02 p.m., Alex Merry wrote:
> > README.md, line 9
> > <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/116588/diff/1/?file=251921#file251921line9>
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> >     "allows to interact with" is bad grammar; "allows interaction with" would work, and "allows <foo> to interact with" would be better.  Maybe "clients" in place of <foo>?

what are "clients"? It's obvious if one knows what the framework does, but if you don't know a client could be anything.


- Martin


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On March 4, 2014, 8:49 a.m., Martin Gräßlin wrote:
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> (Updated March 4, 2014, 8:49 a.m.)
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> Review request for KDE Frameworks.
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> Repository: kwindowsystem
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> Description
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> Improve the README
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> Diffs
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>   README.md 2685b2e441ee2745c50712aac712be1081fec60d 
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> Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/116588/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Martin Gräßlin
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