[Kde-finance-apps] Finance Sprint article on the dot

[Guillaume DE BURE]

Wow, thanks for the extensive proof reading :). Integrated all your comments, except for some small questions (see below)

Guillaume


Le vendredi 25 juin 2010 02:04:07, Jay Woods a écrit :
> I've found the following simple problems:
> 
> The meeting wasn't "in Frankfurt" but "near Frankfurt" in Eschborn.
Corrected thanks to Thaumas B. : 
 "in Eschborn, near Frankfurt, Germany"

> 
> There is an unneeded space in "of :".
> There is an unneeded space in "Sprint ?".
> There is an unneeded space in "topic :".
> There is an unneeded space in "field :".
> There is an unneeded space in "right :".
> There is an unneeded space in "KDE 1 !".
> 
> The "reknown application" should be "renown application".
> 
> The "Ecoystem" should be "Ecosystem".
> 
> The "rigourous" should be "rigorous" in American English or else change 
> "while" to "whilst" throughout for UK English. I prefer the latter or 
> there are also several other changes. (See tenders, catalogue, 5,99$.)
I'd rather go with American english, it has a more "international" feeling, to me at least... no offense meant to UK ;)
I assume catalogue would become catalog, "5,99$" -> "$5,99". What about tenders ?

> 
> It would be cleaner if "KMyMoney's little brother" were "the little 
> brother of KMyMoney".
> 
> Consistency would be served if it were alway "Extragear" and not 
> sometime "extragear" (or the other way around).
> 
> The "clients database" should probably be "client database".
It's a database of clients (or customers). Not a client database as in "client/server". Is your remark still valid ?

> 
> The "KAdressBook" should be "KAddressBook".
> 
> The ". the list" should be ". The list".
> 
> The "envisionned braoder" should be "envisioned broader".
> 
> The "if he wants to put" should be "if he wants to, put".
> 
> I love Alkimia as a concept and a name. Let's see if we can take it away 
> from the alkimia Syntegrity project.
> 
> The "arabian" should be "Arabian".
> 
> The "sticked" should be "stuck".
Aaaarrrrrghhhh damn irregular verbs. I'm always catched by one of them :p (OK, this was bad, I know...)

> 
> The "SQlite" should be "SQLite".
> 
> The "Exhausted," should be "They were exhausted,".
> 
> The "during SoK" should be "during the SoK".
> 
> The "group with Even" should be something else but not that :-).
Sentence is now : "Today, it is a lively group. Even as everyone...."

> 
> The "do so, the KDE" should be "do so. The KDE".
I feel this remark is superseeded by the above correction

> 
> On Thursday, June 24, 2010 01:46:52 pm Guillaume DE BURE wrote:
> > Hi everyone,
> > 
> > Here is a new version, refined with your comments and with a great
> > hand from Alvaro: http://skrooge.org/files/finance_sprint.zip
> > 
> > (zipped to include pictures)
> > 
> > Please keep comments coming :)
> > 
> > Once everything is fine, I'll send it to dot.kde.org !
> > 
> > Cheers,
> > 
> > Guillaume
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