[Kde-finance-apps] Finance Sprint article on the dot

[Jay Woods]

I've found the following simple problems:

The meeting wasn't "in Frankfurt" but "near Frankfurt" in Eschborn.

There is an unneeded space in "of :".
There is an unneeded space in "Sprint ?".
There is an unneeded space in "topic :".
There is an unneeded space in "field :".
There is an unneeded space in "right :".
There is an unneeded space in "KDE 1 !".

The "reknown application" should be "renown application".

The "Ecoystem" should be "Ecosystem".

The "rigourous" should be "rigorous" in American English or else change 
"while" to "whilst" throughout for UK English. I prefer the latter or 
there are also several other changes. (See tenders, catalogue, 5,99$.)

It would be cleaner if "KMyMoney's little brother" were "the little 
brother of KMyMoney".

Consistency would be served if it were alway "Extragear" and not 
sometime "extragear" (or the other way around).

The "clients database" should probably be "client database".

The "KAdressBook" should be "KAddressBook".

The ". the list" should be ". The list".

The "envisionned braoder" should be "envisioned broader".

The "if he wants to put" should be "if he wants to, put".

I love Alkimia as a concept and a name. Let's see if we can take it away 
from the alkimia Syntegrity project.

The "arabian" should be "Arabian".

The "sticked" should be "stuck".

The "SQlite" should be "SQLite".

The "Exhausted," should be "They were exhausted,".

The "during SoK" should be "during the SoK".

The "group with Even" should be something else but not that :-).

The "do so, the KDE" should be "do so. The KDE".

On Thursday, June 24, 2010 01:46:52 pm Guillaume DE BURE wrote:
> Hi everyone,
> 
> Here is a new version, refined with your comments and with a great
> hand from Alvaro: http://skrooge.org/files/finance_sprint.zip
> 
> (zipped to include pictures)
> 
> Please keep comments coming :)
> 
> Once everything is fine, I'll send it to dot.kde.org !
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Guillaume
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