energy measurement handbook | section 1 constructive criticism?

[Nate Graham]

This is really great work, Joseph!

Nate



On 12/13/22 09:20, Joseph P. De Veaugh-Geiss wrote:
> Hi everyone,
> 
> as those of you who follow the Eco initiative know, I am currently 
> working on a handbook for measuring the energy consumption of software.
> 
> A draft of Section 1 is done. It is a brief introduction to the material 
> footprint of digital technology and in particular software, and I wanted 
> to elicit feedback from the community. Note there will be changes to the 
> images/graphics, but the content is ready for review. You can find the 
> text here:
> 
> https://invent.kde.org/teams/eco/be4foss/-/blob/master/handbook/sections/1_material-footprint.md
> 
> If you have time and would like to give feedback (content, style, etc.), 
> it would be much appreciated! I may not be able to incorporate all 
> suggestions, but constructive criticism is always helpful.
> 
> Feel free to send your comments to joseph at kde.org or @joseph:kde.org.
> 
> The other sections at the repository are still under revision, so no 
> need to look over them now.
> 
> Thank you!
> 
> Cheers,
> Joseph
>