energy measurement handbook | section 1 constructive criticism?

[Joseph P. De Veaugh-Geiss]

Hi everyone,

as those of you who follow the Eco initiative know, I am currently 
working on a handbook for measuring the energy consumption of software.

A draft of Section 1 is done. It is a brief introduction to the material 
footprint of digital technology and in particular software, and I wanted 
to elicit feedback from the community. Note there will be changes to the 
images/graphics, but the content is ready for review. You can find the 
text here:

https://invent.kde.org/teams/eco/be4foss/-/blob/master/handbook/sections/1_material-footprint.md

If you have time and would like to give feedback (content, style, etc.), 
it would be much appreciated! I may not be able to incorporate all 
suggestions, but constructive criticism is always helpful.

Feel free to send your comments to joseph at kde.org or @joseph:kde.org.

The other sections at the repository are still under revision, so no 
need to look over them now.

Thank you!

Cheers,
Joseph

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Joseph P. De Veaugh-Geiss
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