[kstars] doc: Fix minor typos, enhance formatting

Yuri Chornoivan null at kde.org
Wed Jan 23 14:49:33 GMT 2019


Git commit 5ccec7d9ffe4c9dd588b7ef433331bc5760b9731 by Yuri Chornoivan.
Committed on 23/01/2019 at 14:49.
Pushed by yurchor into branch 'master'.

Fix minor typos, enhance formatting

M  +8    -8    doc/ekos-align.docbook
M  +6    -6    doc/ekos-capture.docbook

https://commits.kde.org/kstars/5ccec7d9ffe4c9dd588b7ef433331bc5760b9731

diff --git a/doc/ekos-align.docbook b/doc/ekos-align.docbook
index f7a959b5e..ecd5ff5f1 100644
--- a/doc/ekos-align.docbook
+++ b/doc/ekos-align.docbook
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
                         In Ekos Align module, you must set the solver type to <guimenuitem>Online</guimenuitem> so that it uses the local ANSVR server for all astrometry queries. Then you can use the align module as you would normally do.
                     </para>
                     <para>
-                        Remember as indicated above that StellarMate <emphasis>already</emphasis> includes astrometry.net. Therefore, if you would like to use StellarMate remotely to solve your images, simply change solver type to <guimenuitem>Remote</guimenuitem> and ensure that your equipment profile includes <emphasis role="bold">Astrometry</emphasis> driver which can be selected under the <guilabel>Auxiliary</guilabel> dropdown. This is applicable to all operating systems and not just Windows.
+                        Remember as indicated above that StellarMate <emphasis>already</emphasis> includes astrometry.net. Therefore, if you would like to use StellarMate remotely to solve your images, simply change solver type to <guimenuitem>Remote</guimenuitem> and ensure that your equipment profile includes <emphasis role="bold">Astrometry</emphasis> driver which can be selected under the <guilabel>Auxiliary</guilabel> dropdown. This is applicable to all operating systems and not just &Windows;.
                     </para>
                 </listitem>
             </varlistentry>
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@
                 </listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
             <para>
-                By default, the solver will search all over the sky to determine the coordinates of the captured image. This can <emphasis>take a lot of time</emphasis>; therefore, in order to speed up the solver, you can restrict it to only search within a specified area in the sky designated by the RA, DEC, and Radius options above.
+                By default, the solver will search all over the sky to determine the coordinates of the captured image. This can <emphasis>take a lot of time</emphasis>; therefore, in order to speed up the solver, you can restrict it to only search within a specified area in the sky designated by the <guilabel>RA</guilabel>, <guilabel>DEC</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Radius</guilabel> options above.
             </para>
         </sect3>
         
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@
                 </listitem>
             </orderedlist>
             <para>
-                If the solver is successful, Ekos will sync and then slew to the star. The results are displayed in the Solution Results tab along with a bullseye diagram that shows the offset the reported telescope coordinates (&ie; where the telescope <emphasis>thinks</emphasis> it is looking at) vs. its actual position in the sky as determined by the solver.
+                If the solver is successful, Ekos will sync and then slew to the star. The results are displayed in the <guilabel>Solution Results</guilabel> tab along with a bullseye diagram that shows the offset the reported telescope coordinates (&ie; where the telescope <emphasis>thinks</emphasis> it is looking at) vs. its actual position in the sky as determined by the solver.
             </para>
             <para>
                 Each time the solver is executed and returns successful results, Ekos can run on the following actions:
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@
             <sect4 id="ekos-align-legacy-polar-alignment-workflow">
                 <title>Legacy Polar Alignment Workflow</title>
                 <para>
-                    Using the Polar Alignment mode, Ekos can measure and correct for polar alignment errors. To measure Azimuth error, point your mount to a star close to the meridian. If you live in the northern hemisphere, you will point the mount toward the southern meridian. Click on <guibutton>Measure Az Error</guibutton> to begin the process. Ekos will try to measure the drift between two images and calculates the error accordingly. You can ask Ekos to correct Azimuth error by clicking on the <guibutton>Correct Az Error</guibutton> button. Ekos will slew to a new location and asks you to adjust the mount's azimuth knobs until the star is in the center of the Field of View. You can use the Focus Module's Framing feature to take a look at the image as you make your adjustments.
+                    Using the Polar Alignment mode, Ekos can measure and correct the polar alignment errors. To measure Azimuth error, point your mount to a star close to the meridian. If you live in the northern hemisphere, you will point the mount toward the southern meridian. Click on <guibutton>Measure Az Error</guibutton> to begin the process. Ekos will try to measure the drift between two images and calculates the error accordingly. You can ask Ekos to correct Azimuth error by clicking on the <guibutton>Correct Az Error</guibutton> button. Ekos will slew to a new location and asks you to adjust the mount's azimuth knobs until the star is in the center of the Field of View. You can use the Focus Module's <link linkend="focus-focuser-group">Framing feature</link> to take a look at the image as you make your adjustments.
                 </para>
                 <para>
                     Similarly, to measure Altitude error, click on the <guibutton>Measure Alt Error</guibutton> button. You need to point your mount either east or west and set the <guilabel>Altitude Direction</guilabel> combo box accordingly. Ekos will take two images and calculates the error. You can ask Ekos to correct Altitude error by clicking on the <guibutton>Correct Alt Error</guibutton> button. As with Azimuth correction, Ekos will slew to a new location and asks you to adjust the mount's altitude knobs until the star is in the center of the FOV.
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
                         <para>
-                            Switch mode to <guilabel>Polar Alignment</guilabel>. Click <guibutton>Measure Az Error</guibutton>. It will ask you to slew to a star at the southern meridian which we already done click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>. Ekos will now perform the error calculation.
+                            Switch mode to <guilabel>Polar Alignment</guilabel>. Click <guibutton>Measure Az Error</guibutton>. It will ask you to slew to a star at the southern meridian which we already done. Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>. Ekos will now perform the error calculation.
                         </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
                         <para>
-                            <guibutton>Stop Framing</guibutton> in the <link linkend="ekos-focus">Focus module</link>.
+                            <guibutton>Stop Framing</guibutton> in the <link linkend="focus-focuser-group">Focus module</link>.
                         </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
@@ -691,12 +691,12 @@
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
                         <para>
-                            Click <guibutton>Measure Alt Error</guibutton>. It will ask you to slew to a star at either the eastern (Azimuth 90) or western (Azimuth 270) which we already done click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>. Ekos will now perform the error calculation.
+                            Click <guibutton>Measure Alt Error</guibutton>. It will ask you to slew to a star at either the eastern (Azimuth 90) or western (Azimuth 270) horizon which we already done. Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton>. Ekos will now perform the error calculation.
                         </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
                         <para>
-                            To correct for the error, click <guibutton>Correct Alt Error</guibutton>. Ekos will now slew to a different point in the sky, and you will be required to <emphasis role="bold">ONLY</emphasis> adjust the mount's altitude knobs to center the star in the field of view. Start framing as done before in the focus module to help you with the centering.
+                            To correct for the error, click <guibutton>Correct Alt Error</guibutton>. Ekos will now slew to a different point in the sky, and you will be required to <emphasis role="bold">ONLY</emphasis> adjust the mount's altitude knobs to center the star in the field of view. Start framing as done before in the <link linkend="focus-focuser-group">focus module</link> to help you with the centering.
                         </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
diff --git a/doc/ekos-capture.docbook b/doc/ekos-capture.docbook
index e4a22b6d0..c89013103 100644
--- a/doc/ekos-capture.docbook
+++ b/doc/ekos-capture.docbook
@@ -256,11 +256,11 @@
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
                 <para>
-                    <guilabel>Autofocus if HFR exceeds a value</guilabel>: If autofocus is enabled in the focus module and at least one autofocus operation was completed successfully, you can set the maximum acceptable HFR value. If this option is enabled then between consecutive exposures, the HFR value is recalculated, and if found to exceed the maximum acceptable HFR value, then an autofocus operation is automatically triggered. If the autofocus operation is completed successfully, the sequence queue resumes, otherwise, the job is aborted.</para>
+                    <guilabel>Autofocus if HFR ></guilabel>: If autofocus is enabled in the <link linkend="ekos-focus">focus module</link> and at least one autofocus operation was completed successfully, you can set the maximum acceptable HFR value. If this option is enabled then between consecutive exposures, the HFR value is recalculated, and if found to exceed the maximum acceptable HFR value, then an autofocus operation is automatically triggered. If the autofocus operation is completed successfully, the sequence queue resumes, otherwise, the job is aborted.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
                 <para>
-                    <guilabel>Meridian Flip</guilabel>: If supported by the mount, set the hour angle limit (in hours) before a <ulink url="http://astronomy.mdodd.com/gem_movement.html">meridian flip</ulink> is commanded. For example, if you set the meridian flip duration to 0.1 hours. Ekos shall wait until the mount passes the meridian by 0.1 hours (6 minutes), then it commands the mount to perform a meridian flip. After the meridian flip is complete, Ekos re-aligns using astrometry.net (if <link linkend="ekos-align">the alignment</link> was used) and resumes guiding (if it was started before) and then resumes the capture process automatically.</para>
+                    <guilabel>Meridian Flip</guilabel>: If supported by the mount, set the hour angle limit (in hours) before a <ulink url="http://astronomy.mdodd.com/gem_movement.html">meridian flip</ulink> is commanded. For example, if you set the meridian flip duration to 0.1 hours, Ekos shall wait until the mount passes the meridian by 0.1 hours (6 minutes), then it commands the mount to perform a meridian flip. After the meridian flip is complete, Ekos re-aligns using astrometry.net (if <link linkend="ekos-align">the alignment</link> was used) and resumes guiding (if it was started before) and then resumes the capture process automatically.</para>
             </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
     </sect3>
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@
 
         <important>
             <para>
-                <emphasis role="bold">Job Progress</emphasis>: Ekos is designed to execute and resume the sequence over multiple nights if required. Therefore, if <guilabel>Remember Job Progress</guilabel> option is enabled in Ekos Options, Ekos shall scan the file system to count how many images are already completed and will resume the sequence from where it was left off. If this default behavior is not desired, simply turn off <guilabel>Remember Job Progress</guilabel> under options.
+                <emphasis role="bold">Job Progress</emphasis>: Ekos is designed to execute and resume the sequence over multiple nights if required. Therefore, if <guilabel>Remember Job Progress</guilabel> option is enabled in <link linkend="ekos">Ekos Options</link>, Ekos shall scan the file system to count how many images are already completed and will resume the sequence from where it was left off. If this default behavior is not desired, simply turn off <guilabel>Remember Job Progress</guilabel> under options.
             </para>
         </important>
 
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
                 <para>
-                    <guilabel>Offset</guilabel>: Set relative offsets. Ekos will command a focus offset change if there is a difference between the current and target filter offsets. For example, given the values in the example image to the right, if the current filter is set to <emphasis>Red</emphasis> and next filter is <emphasis>Green</emphasis>, then Ekos shall command the focuser to Focus In by +300 ticks. Relative positive focus offsets denote Focus Out while negative values denote Focus In.
+                    <guilabel>Offset</guilabel>: Set relative offsets. Ekos will command a focus offset change if there is a difference between the current and target filter offsets. For example, given the values in the example image, if the current filter is set to <emphasis>Red</emphasis> and next filter is <emphasis>Green</emphasis>, then Ekos shall command the focuser to Focus In by +300 ticks. Relative positive focus offsets denote Focus Out while negative values denote Focus In.
                 </para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@
             </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
         <para>
-            Let's take an example. Suppose the capture sequence is running and the current filter is <guilabel>Green</guilabel>, so the relative already offset is set to +300. The next image in the sequence uses Hydrogen Alpha (H_Alpha) so before Ekos captures the next frame, the following actions take place:
+            Let's take an example. Suppose the capture sequence is running and the current filter is <guilabel>Green</guilabel>, so the relative offset is already set to +300. The next image in the sequence uses Hydrogen Alpha (H_Alpha) so before Ekos captures the next frame, the following actions take place:
         </para>
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>
@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@
             Field Rotators are supported in INDI & Ekos. The rotator angle is the raw angle reported by the rotator and is not necessary the <ulink url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Position_angle">Position Angle</ulink>. A Position Angle of <emphasis>zero</emphasis> indicates that the frame top (indicated by small arrow) is pointing <emphasis>directly</emphasis> at the pole. The position angle is expressed as E of N (East of North), so 90 degrees PA indicates the frame <emphasis>top</emphasis> points 90 degrees away (counter-clockwise) from the pole. Check <ulink url="http://www.srl.caltech.edu/NuSTAR_Public/NuSTAROperationSite/file/NuSTAR-PA.pdf">examples</ulink> for various PAs.
         </para>
         <para>
-            To calibrate the Position Angle (PA), capture and solve an image in the Ekos Align module. An <emphasis>offset</emphasis> and a <emphasis>multiplier</emphasis> are applied to the raw angle to produce the position angle. The Ekos Rotator dialog permits direct control of the raw angle and also the PA. The offset and multiplier can be changed manually to synchronize the rotator's raw angle with the actual PA. Check <guilabel>Sync FOV to PA</guilabel> to rotate the current Field of View (FOV) indicator on the Sky Map with the PA value as you change it in the dialog.
+            To calibrate the Position Angle (PA), capture and solve an image in the <link linkend="ekos-align">Ekos Align module</link>. An <emphasis>offset</emphasis> and a <emphasis>multiplier</emphasis> are applied to the raw angle to produce the position angle. The Ekos Rotator dialog permits direct control of the raw angle and also the PA. The offset and multiplier can be changed manually to synchronize the rotator's raw angle with the actual PA. Check <guilabel>Sync FOV to PA</guilabel> to rotate the current Field of View (FOV) indicator on the Sky Map with the PA value as you change it in the dialog.
         </para>
         
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