[kde-doc-english] [Bug 306226] New: Kalzium - update Handbook

[Aaron Honeycutt]

On Tuesday, September 04, 2012 02:27:22 AM André Marcelo Alvarenga 
wrote:
> https://bugs.kde.org/show_bug.cgi?id=306226
> 
>             Bug ID: 306226
>           Severity: normal
>            Version: unspecified
>           Priority: NOR
>           Assignee: kde-doc-english at kde.org
>            Summary: Kalzium - update Handbook
>     Classification: Unclassified
>                 OS: Linux
>           Reporter: andrealvarenga at gmx.net
>           Hardware: Debian stable
>             Status: UNCONFIRMED
>          Component: Corrections
>            Product: docs
> 
> 1)
> #: index.docbook:147
> msgid "Here are some screenshots of &kalzium; in action:"
> 
> I think this string should be after the next string. (with changes)
> 
> --------Original---------
> Overview of Kalzium usage
> 
> Here are some screenshots of Kalzium in action:
> 
> Kalzium is very easy to use. It is specially designed for students of all
> ages to use as a small and quick database.
> 
> (screenshot)
> 
> --------Changed---------
> Overview of Kalzium usage
> 
> Kalzium is very easy to use. It is specially designed for students of all
> ages to use as a small and quick database.
> 
> Here is a screenshot of Kalzium in action:
> 
> (screenshot)
> 
> 
> Reason:
> 
> - Just one screenshot in 3.1 caption (See PDF Handbook for better 
viewing)
> 
> 2)
> 
> The Kalzium Sidebar reference needs to be reviewed:
> 
> Reasons:
> 
> - In Kalzium Sidebar there are three tabs: Overview, View and 
Calculate. In
> Kalzium Handbook there are four tabs: Overview, State of Matter, 
View and
> Calculate.
> - The State of Matter tab is now inside the View tab.
> - The View tab has two items now: Scheme and Gradient.
> 
> Affected messages: 196 (index.docbook:836) to 213 
(index.docbook:909) - (in
> trunk/docmessages)
> 
> Reproducible: Always
> 
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- I agree with your change, it makes more sense grammar wise.