[kde-doc-english] Fwd: AdeptGuide for Review

[Jonathan Jesse]

On 1/1/07, Burkhard Lück <lueck at hube-lueck.de> wrote:
>
> Am Montag, 1. Januar 2007 19:49 schrieb Jonathan Jesse:
> > Good afternoon and happy new year,
> >
> > I sent this message to the list and wondered if anyone had a chance to
> > review the documentation.  I would like to add the adept guide into the
> KDE
> > docs.
> > Here is the link to the document:
> > https://docteam.ubuntu.com/repos/trunk/kubuntu/unused/adeptguide/C/
> >
>
> Just a few notes:
>
> Doesn't follow the structure found in kdelibs/kdoctools/template.docbook
> (in
> websvn.kde.org)
>
> Check with the KDE DocBook Sanitizer
> http://www.englishbreakfastnetwork.org/sanitizer/just-in-time.php
> Issues found: DOCTYPE declaration, translator markers,  preferred words,
> applicable entities
>
> -<xref linkend = "adept-filters" endterm = "title-adept-list"/>
> +<xref linkend = "adept-filters" endterm = "title-adept-filters"/>
>
> replace gpl.xml with entity &underGPL;
>
> Markup for all gui elements: guilabel, guimenuitem etc., instead of
> <emphasis>
>
> Some typos:
> -The Menu Bar provides the following menus ad options:
> +The Menu Bar provides the following menus and options:
>
> -Listed packgaes are displayed in tabular form.
> +Listed packages are displayed in tabular form.
>
> -<mousebutton>left</mousebutton> click the <guibutton>Apply</guibutton>
> butto
> to save the changes, or
> +<mousebutton>left</mousebutton> click the <guibutton>Apply</guibutton>
> button
> to save the changes, or
>
> Burkhard Lück
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Burkhard

Thanks for the pointers, this is my first attempt at a KDE doc and I
followed a lot of what we do for Ubuntu docs and see I need to
change/improve things.
Thanks for the help, I'll send another email to the list once I get these
changes and others I find done


Jonathan
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