[kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - second draft for discussion

[Mario Fux]

On Montag, 15. Februar 2016 19:29:32 CET Ingo Klöcker wrote:

Morning Ingo, Lydia and Co

> On Monday 15 February 2016 18:36:18 Lydia Pintscher wrote:
> > Hi everyone,
> > 
> > A bit less than two weeks ago we sent the first draft for the
> > community vision for KDE. We have gotten a lot of useful feedback and
> > have now put this into a second draft. It reads as follows:
> > "KDE creates technology for a world in which everyone has freedom,
> > privacy and control over their digital life."
> 
> I like it. My only nitpick is with "freedom, privacy and control over
> their digital life", because when reading it, I automatically parsed it
> as "freedom over their digital life, privacy over their digital life and
> control over their digital life" which doesn't make sense.
> 
> What about "[...] everyone has control over their digital life, freedom,
> and privacy". Hmm, no. This can be misread as "control over their
> digital life, control over their freedom, and control over their
> privacy".
> 
> What about "[...] everyone has freedom and privacy and control over
> their digital life". It's a bit convoluted, but I think it better avoids
> the misreading.

+1 to this. Maybe this could still be improved/tuned a bit.

But in general I like the community vision and in particular the term 
"technology" rather than "just" software.

> Regards,
> Ingo

Thanks for this work everybody (all the groups!)
Mario