[kde-community] Proposal: KDE Manifesto wording revision

[Carl Symons]

On Sunday, November 10, 2013 18:28 Kevin Ottens wrote:
> Hello community,
> 
> After the publication of the initial version of the manifesto, I said I'd
> act as curator for the time being and that it should be a living document
> which would get updated from time to time.
> 
> I didn't really live up to it so far as no revision has been done. But
> somehow I found a small chunk of time today and decided to use it to
> prepare a new revision.
> 
> As a matter of fact, I got some feedback from people. Some of the items are
> rather large (and I'll send separate emails for those), but there was a
> collection of nice wording simplifications.
> 
> That's what this email is about, I'd like to apply the attached patch, it's
> mostly about small scale changes. I don't see anything which could be
> controversial in there.
> 
> Any opinions on this? I'd like to collect feedback before proceeding with a
> vote of the e.V. membership and then a push.
> 
> Regards.

I support the changes.

Carl