thesis feedback

[Lydia Pintscher]

On Sat, Jan 1, 2011 at 06:46, Nikhil Marathe <nsm.nikhil at gmail.com> wrote:
> This is a great start! I really liked the analysis of Amarok and it would be
> interesting to see how some of our problems can be solved based on Chapter 5.

:) Thanks!

> Chapter 2, Page 4 - Firefox is a 'web browser', not 'web browsers'

fixed

> Would it be possible to have better fonts in the Amarok 2.3.2
> screenshot in section 2.4 ? :D

Hmmm you're right. This is probably a scaling problem. Not sure if/how
I can fix that. Any suggestions?

> The line: The goal for Amarok is to develop a program that can help
> its users to rediscover
> their music - leading to its tagline and motto “Rediscover Your
> Music”. can probably be rephrased
> to use "Rediscover Your Music" only once, making it shorter and memorable. Say:
> Amarok's goal and tagline is to develop a program that can help its
> users "Rediscover Your Music".
> But that is just my individual opinion.

That was actually intentional. I'll think about it.

> "I found live-long friends here" s/live/life/

fixed

Thanks for reviewing.

> A happy new year to everyone!

Happy New Year everyone! :)

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Lydia Pintscher
Amarok community manager
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