thesis feedback

[Nikhil Marathe]

On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 6:37 PM, Lydia Pintscher <lydia at kde.org> wrote:
> Heya folks :)
>
> I finished the first version of two chapters of my thesis and would
> like to have some feedback from you. I am especially interested in
> hearing if you agree with my findings so far or not and if I missed
> something crucial. Typo/style comments and so on are welcome as well.
> The chapters that are finished so far are 2:Fundamentals and
> 4:Analysis of the Current Development Processes. You can find the
> latest version at http://lydiapintscher.de/tmp/thesis.pdf
>

This is a great start! I really liked the analysis of Amarok and it would be
interesting to see how some of our problems can be solved based on Chapter 5.

Chapter 2, Page 4 - Firefox is a 'web browser', not 'web browsers'

Would it be possible to have better fonts in the Amarok 2.3.2
screenshot in section 2.4 ? :D

The line: The goal for Amarok is to develop a program that can help
its users to rediscover
their music - leading to its tagline and motto “Rediscover Your
Music”. can probably be rephrased
to use "Rediscover Your Music" only once, making it shorter and memorable. Say:
Amarok's goal and tagline is to develop a program that can help its
users "Rediscover Your Music".
But that is just my individual opinion.

"I found live-long friends here" s/live/life/

A happy new year to everyone!
Nikhil