thesis feedback

[Lydia Pintscher]

On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 15:09, Mark Kretschmann <kretschmann at kde.org> wrote:
> On Fri, Dec 31, 2010 at 2:07 PM, Lydia Pintscher <lydia at kde.org> wrote:
>> Heya folks :)
>>
>> I finished the first version of two chapters of my thesis and would
>> like to have some feedback from you. I am especially interested in
>> hearing if you agree with my findings so far or not and if I missed
>> something crucial. Typo/style comments and so on are welcome as well.
>> The chapters that are finished so far are 2:Fundamentals and
>> 4:Analysis of the Current Development Processes. You can find the
>> latest version at http://lydiapintscher.de/tmp/thesis.pdf
>
> I must say:
>
> The thesis is great, the topic is well chosen, and it was a pleasure
> to read so far. It's also cool that we could potentially re-use your
> thesis later on, e.g. for demonstrating our development process in
> talks.

:)

> One issue: There are tons of grammar issues and not-so-good-English.
> I'm not a native speaker, but I noticed some, and if you wish I can
> point them out to you later on (short on time right now).

Hmm I am pretty sure it can't be a ton ;-)
But please do send them so I can fix them.


Cheers
Lydia

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Lydia Pintscher
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