taglines on PA3 website.

[Aaron J. Seigo]

hi...

some suggested minor edits for the taglines at the top of the PA3 website, 
mostly little grammar improvements:

                    <div>Plasma Active<br/>An interface for people on the 
move.</div>
                    <div>Organize your workflow with the power of 
activities.</div>
                    <div>Sharing has never been this easy.</div>
                    <div>Yes, we have an addons store. You can have one, 
too.</div>
                    <div>Power to the user with our semantic file 
browser.</div>
                    <div>Top of the class document viewer and e-book 
reader.</div>


note that i switched the order of Activities to the top. this lets us talk 
about Activities first later on, which is the foundational concept here.

i'm on the fence with "Power to the users with our semantic file browser." 
since it uses the technical and unfamiliar term "semantic" and it doesn't 
particularly say anything about the benefit of it ("Power to the user" is kind 
of a generic "rah-rah" slogan :). sth that talks directly to the benefit might 
be more effective, such as "All files are at your fingertips with the semantic 
file browser." it still uses the word "semantic", but it now hints as to the 
benefit a bit more?

if this is to be the elevator pitch, i really think we need an entry there for 
Kontact Touch. email/calendaring is a BIG deal for us. it's a feature set most 
devices don't do well or even at all.

are we going to have a page somewhere about each of these items? i think it 
would be a good idea to do so, and i'd be willing to crank out the text for at 
least one per day so we can describe the full benefits more.

the text below "What is Plasma Active" should then reflect these main points 
above in the list of things we're talking about it (the list that currently 
starts with activities). that means the same nouns in the same order as they 
appear in the slideshow.

thoughts?

-- 
Aaron J. Seigo
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