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Revision: 4229
          http://rkward.svn.sourceforge.net/rkward/?rev=4229&view=rev
Author:   tfry
Date:     2012-04-30 16:54:48 +0000 (Mon, 30 Apr 2012)
Log Message:
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Update notes, and remove url for one non-open-access article.

Modified Paths:
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    branches/jss_dec_10/FINAL_JSS_TEX/FINAL_splitted/sources.bib
    branches/jss_dec_10/final_polished/Notes/specific_comments.txt

Modified: branches/jss_dec_10/FINAL_JSS_TEX/FINAL_splitted/sources.bib
===================================================================
--- branches/jss_dec_10/FINAL_JSS_TEX/FINAL_splitted/sources.bib	2012-04-30 16:52:24 UTC (rev 4228)
+++ branches/jss_dec_10/FINAL_JSS_TEX/FINAL_splitted/sources.bib	2012-04-30 16:54:48 UTC (rev 4229)
@@ -399,8 +399,7 @@
   issn = {1075-3583},
   issue = {190},
   issue_date = {February 2010},
-  publisher = {Specialized Systems Consultants, Inc.},
-  url = {http://portal.acm.org/citation.cfm?id=1723009.1723010}
+  publisher = {Specialized Systems Consultants, Inc.}
 }
 
 @INCOLLECTION{Jiang2009,

Modified: branches/jss_dec_10/final_polished/Notes/specific_comments.txt
===================================================================
--- branches/jss_dec_10/final_polished/Notes/specific_comments.txt	2012-04-30 16:52:24 UTC (rev 4228)
+++ branches/jss_dec_10/final_polished/Notes/specific_comments.txt	2012-04-30 16:54:48 UTC (rev 4229)
@@ -1,12 +1,9 @@
 ---- What's left TODO of the specific notes: ----
 
-o Formally \cite suitable references for KDE and Qt etc. instead of
-just giving URLs in footnotes.
-
 o Include the URLs from Footnotes 4-10, 20-23 into the regular text (e.g.,
 in parentheses).
 
-TODO: I think we did this wrong. Re-do the \url{} markup on all urls, but merge these footnotes into the main text body.
+-- Done. But I guess now we have to revisit all page breaks. Sigh...
 
 o \pkg{R} -> \proglang{R}. There are also various instances of "R" without
 any markup, please correct.
@@ -17,10 +14,18 @@
 journal is open access (i.e., including JSS, R News etc.) a single URL
 or the DOI should be kept.
 
-TODO: check again
+TODO: check again. I think this basically translates to "Either link to the full document, or do not link to anything at all" (possibly excepting articles in press).
 
 --------- What's done (with comments if needed) ---------
 
+o Formally \cite suitable references for KDE and Qt etc. instead of
+just giving URLs in footnotes.
+
+-- We have wrapped the URLs into formal citations. We have kept the remainder of the
+two footnotes (but merged them into a single footnote), as we believe this will help
+the casual reader to get a very basic idea about the meaning of the two terms. We hope
+this complies with your expectations.
+
 o Omit the footnotes in the \author{} statement. Instead put the remarks
 into the \section*{Acknowledgments}. Give only the main affiliation in
 \author{}, further affiliations can be given in the \Address{}.

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