D5189: Partial rewrite to add and update info.

[Burkhard Lück]

lueck added a comment.


  Please readd the screenshots using the default design ( https://l10n.kde.org/docs/screenshots.php )
  
  Thanks

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> index.docbook:70
> +<para>
> +&plasma; provides a modern and customizable environment for running your favorite applications and accessing your information wherever it may be. Other common attributes of the &plasma; Desktop include advanced window management and desktop effects, support for KDE Plasma Widgets, integrated search, hardware management and a high degree of customizability. &plasma;  is  simple by default and powerful when needed. This means that a user can configure pretty much anything about the desktop, but doesn't have to. It is KDE's flagship product.
> +</para>

for KDE Plasma Widgets -> do we need KDE here?

> index.docbook:107
> +<itemizedlist>
> +<listitem><para>A menu in the top left corner, which gives you options regarding widgets and activities
> +</para></listitem>

This is called the Desktop Toolbox?

> index.docbook:110-111
> +
> +<listitem><para>Hovering over the same corner will show all open apps
> +</para></listitem>
> +

Hmm, does not work for me using up to date neon-devedition-unstable

> index.docbook:275
> +<sect2 id="clocks">
> +<title>Clocks</title>
> +

Clocks appear in systemtray

> index.docbook:308
> +<sect3 id="calendar">
> +<title>Calendar</title>
> +

Calender appears in systemtray and is already part of the clock, so why a separate calendar her?

> index.docbook:372-373
>  
> -<sect2 id="panel-digital-clock">
> -<title>Digital Clock</title>
> +<sect2 id="twod-plots">
> +<title>2D Plots</title>
>  

not in the panel building plasma from source or using neon
we should stick with the defaults here, because everybody has different favorite applets
this couls be in a section with additional applets.

> index.docbook:397
> +
> +<sect2 id="calculator">
> +<title>Calculator</title>

see twod-plots

> index.docbook:407
> +<sect2 id="color-picker">
> +<title>Color Picker</title>
>  

see twod-plots

> index.docbook:416
> +<sect2 id="comic-viewer">
> +<title>Comic Viewer</title>
>  

see twod-plots

> index.docbook:424
> +
> +<sect2 id="monitoring-widgets">
> +<title>Monitoring Widgets</title>

see twod-plots

> index.docbook:446
> +<para>
> +On the right of any panel is a button which opens the <guimenu>Panel Settings</guimenu> menu. This menu allows you to change the size of the panel; drag the arrows pointing left to change the minimum width of the panel and drag the arrows pointing right to change the maximum width. The <guibutton>Screen Edge</guibutton> button acts like a handle to move the panel to any side of the screen. The <guibutton>Height</guibutton> button can be dragged up and down to change the height of the panel. <guibutton>Add Widgets</guibutton> and <guibutton>Add Spacer</guibutton> are self-explanatory. Under <guibutton>More Settings</guibutton>, one can change the panel's alignment and visibility. That menu also allows the user to increase the panel's minimum size to its maximum (<guilabel>Maximize Panel</guilabel>), remove the panel, and prevent widgets from being edited (<guilabel>Lock Widgets</guilabel>).
>  </para>

True only for unlocked widgets, so this info should be added here

> index.docbook:479
> +<para>
> +To change the &plasma; theme or download a new one through &knewstuff; open the <menuchoice><guimenu>Appearance</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Desktop Theme</guimenuitem></menuchoice> page in the &systemsettings;.
> +</para>

The <emphasis role="bold">Dashboard</emphasis> gets those &plasma; widgets in front of you, much like the <guilabel>Show desktop</guilabel> functionality you are used to from traditional desktops.
is missing from the pevious version

> index.docbook:496
> +<para>
> +Use the button to open the <guilabel>Plasma Search</guilabel> &systemsettings; module and configure where and what to search for in &krunner;.
> +</para>

<inlinemediaobject><imageobject><imagedata fileref="krunner-configure.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject></inlinemediaobject>
is missing here

REPOSITORY
  R119 Plasma Desktop

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D5189

To: ivanthekdefan, ltoscano, yurchor, lueck
Cc: kde-doc-english, plasma-devel, progwolff, lesliezhai, ali-mohamed, jensreuterberg, abetts, sebas, apol
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