D12908: Improve two messages
Michael Reeves
reeves.87 at gmail.com
Wed May 16 20:08:30 UTC 2018
I am getting the same vibe not sure off hand how to improve it. One
instance is missing connector word. The wording is understandable but
awkward. I am not in position to offer official review in any case.
On Wed, May 16, 2018, 1:59 PM Albert Astals Cid <noreply at phabricator.kde.org>
wrote:
> aacid added subscribers: ngraham, aacid.
> aacid added a comment. View Revision <https://phabricator.kde.org/D12908>
>
> The english, at least in the last one (enable all messages) seems a bit
> weird, but not being a native speaker i can't really suggest a better
> alternative. @ngraham <https://phabricator.kde.org/p/ngraham/> do you
> have some time to review the text changes in here?
>
> *REPOSITORY*
> R417 KSudoku
>
> *REVISION DETAIL*
> https://phabricator.kde.org/D12908
>
> *To: *gregormi, KDE Games
> *Cc: *aacid, ngraham, kde-games-devel
>
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