D16395: Update the "About KDE" text

[David C]

davidc added a comment.


  Thanks for the update, and for tightening some of the language. The only nag I have is with the last sentence in the first paragraph.
  
  Seeing Plasma described as "friendly" seems a bit like fluff and is an awkward choice of words for a user interface. I know you were probably going for "user-friendly" and that it would be a bit cumbersome when added to the sentence, but I think it might be best just to strike "friendly and powerful" entirely, since the sentence runs on a bit as it is.

REPOSITORY
  R263 KXmlGui

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D16395

To: ngraham, #vdg, #plasma, #frameworks, #kde_applications, #kde_promo
Cc: davidc, xyquadrat, rizzitello, ltoscano, aspotashev, abetts, kde-frameworks-devel, michaelh, ngraham, bruns
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