[kde-doc-english] [kblackbox] doc: Proofread + update KBlackbox handbook to 16.04

Burkhard Lück lueck at hube-lueck.de
Tue May 10 09:57:38 UTC 2016


Git commit 51416abb49ec58e490eefb8a456be5c947269d0e by Burkhard Lück.
Committed on 10/05/2016 at 09:57.
Pushed by lueck into branch 'master'.

Proofread + update KBlackbox handbook to 16.04

remove entities kappname, package, kappversion - not used anymore
bump date + releaseinfo
update screenshot
remove appendix

M  +-    --    doc/gameboard.png
M  +20   -42   doc/index.docbook

http://commits.kde.org/kblackbox/51416abb49ec58e490eefb8a456be5c947269d0e

diff --git a/doc/gameboard.png b/doc/gameboard.png
index 9801ce7..401cf81 100644
Binary files a/doc/gameboard.png and b/doc/gameboard.png differ
diff --git a/doc/index.docbook b/doc/index.docbook
index 572beeb..0f5b44d 100644
--- a/doc/index.docbook
+++ b/doc/index.docbook
@@ -1,9 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" ?>
-<!--IMPORTANT: please note that'do not change this!' notice does not apply to translators -->
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//KDE//DTD DocBook XML V4.5-Based Variant V1.1//EN" "dtd/kdedbx45.dtd" [
-  <!ENTITY kappname "&kblackbox;">
-  <!ENTITY kappversion "0.4.0"><!--Applicaion version. Use this variable everywhere it's needed.-->
-  <!ENTITY package "kdegames">  <!-- do not change this! -->
   <!ENTITY % English "INCLUDE" > <!-- change language only here -->
   <!ENTITY % addindex "IGNORE"> <!-- do not change this! -->
 ]>
@@ -39,12 +35,12 @@
 <holder>&Nicolas.Roffet;</holder>
 </copyright>
 <legalnotice>&FDLNotice;</legalnotice> 
-<date>2013-05-05</date><!-- Date of (re)writing, or update.-->
-<releaseinfo>&kappversion; (&kde; 4.11)</releaseinfo><!-- Application version number. Use the variable definitions within header to change this value.-->
+<date>2016-05-09</date>
+<releaseinfo>0.5.0 (Applications 16.04)</releaseinfo>
  
 <!--Short description of this document. Do not change unless necessary!-->
 <abstract>
-	<para>This documentation describes the game of &kblackbox; version &kappversion;</para>
+	<para>This documentation describes the game of &kblackbox; version 0.5.0</para>
 </abstract>
  
 <!--List of relevan keywords-->
@@ -301,30 +297,26 @@ any.)</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
-	<term>
-		<menuchoice>
-			<shortcut>
-				<keycombo action="simul">&Ctrl;<keycap>Q</keycap></keycombo>
-			</shortcut>
-			<guimenu>Game</guimenu>
-			<guimenuitem>Quit</guimenuitem>
-		</menuchoice>
-	</term>
-	<listitem>
-		<para>This closes the window and quits &kblackbox;.</para>
-	</listitem>
+<term><menuchoice>
+<shortcut>
+<keycombo action="simul">&Ctrl;<keycap>Q</keycap></keycombo>
+</shortcut>
+<guimenu>Game</guimenu>
+<guimenuitem>Quit</guimenuitem>
+</menuchoice></term>
+<listitem>
+<para>This closes the window and quits &kblackbox;.</para>
+</listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
-	<term>
-		<menuchoice>
-			<guimenu>Move</guimenu>
-			<guimenuitem>Solve</guimenuitem>
-		</menuchoice>
-	</term>
-	<listitem>
-		<para>Use it to give up a game. It shows you the solution: the right positions of the balls.</para>
-	</listitem>
+<term><menuchoice>
+<guimenu>Move</guimenu>
+<guimenuitem>Solve</guimenuitem>
+</menuchoice></term>
+<listitem>
+<para>Use it to give up a game. It shows you the solution: the right positions of the balls.</para>
+</listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
@@ -394,20 +386,6 @@ for &kde; 2.0 by &Lauri.Watts; &Lauri.Watts.mail;. Reviewed by &Philip.Rodrigues
  
 </chapter>
   
-<appendix id="installation">
-<title>Installation</title>
- 
-&install.intro.documentation;
- 
- 
-<sect1 id="Compilation">
-<title>Compilation and Installation</title>
- 
-&install.compile.documentation;
- 
-</sect1>
-</appendix>
- 
 &documentation.index; 
 </book>
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