[kde-doc-english] [kstars] doc: Fix markup in updated kstars docbooks

Burkhard Lück lueck at hube-lueck.de
Sat Jul 9 12:24:29 UTC 2016


Git commit 22fef4da19294a3d60c4ba6ff0e46e6e921a6c40 by Burkhard Lück.
Committed on 09/07/2016 at 12:23.
Pushed by lueck into branch 'master'.

Fix markup in updated kstars docbooks

improve markup
remove recently added ellipses (...) in <gui*> markup, has a meaning only in the GUI
use entites (&kstars; &ie;)
use preferred words (Internet)
partly already committed by yurchor with http://commits.kde.org/kstars/c9cfaf90e2f6ece1eed97627e90a235ba7a5dcb9
REVIEW:128407

M  +18   -49   doc/commands.docbook
M  +10   -10   doc/config.docbook

http://commits.kde.org/kstars/22fef4da19294a3d60c4ba6ff0e46e6e921a6c40

diff --git a/doc/commands.docbook b/doc/commands.docbook
index 41f491f..1717028 100644
--- a/doc/commands.docbook
+++ b/doc/commands.docbook
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@ dialog to download additional data for &kstars;.
 <guisubmenu>Updates</guisubmenu>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>This submenu can be used to update various object data, namely asteroids, comets and satellites orbital 
-elements as well as recent supernovae data from internet. The data will be downloaded for the current user account only. 
+elements as well as recent supernovae data from Internet. The data will be downloaded for the current user account only.
 If you use &kstars; from different account you should download them for every account separately.
 </para>
 <para>&kstars; tries to download recent supernovae list automatically by default. You can switch the download off using <guilabel>Supernovae</guilabel> page of &kstars; Settings window.</para>
@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ tool</para></listitem>
 <keycombo action="simul">&Ctrl;<keycap>2</keycap></keycombo>
 </shortcut>
 <guimenu>Observation</guimenu>
-<guimenuitem>Execute the session Plan...</guimenuitem>
+<guimenuitem>Execute the session Plan</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>Opens <link linkend="tool-obsplanner">session plan wizard</link> or execute the planned session.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -760,14 +760,14 @@ the left-click mouse button and dragging it to the new position.
 <guimenuitem>Main Toolbar</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>Toggle display of the Main Toolbar. By default, the Main Toolbar provides useful shortcuts 
-for controlling the sky map view (i.e. Zoom in and Zoom out) and for controlling KStars clock as well. 
+for controlling the sky map view (&ie; Zoom in and Zoom out) and for controlling &kstars; clock as well.
 You can Start / Stop the clock, advance one step backward / forward in time and also you can easily set 
-the time step used by KStars' clock. The time step is the rate at which time flows in the simulation. 
+the time step used by &kstars;' clock. The time step is the rate at which time flows in the simulation.
 For setting the time step, you can use the spin box used for establishing the time step units and the 
 spin box used for increasing / decreasing the time step value.
 Using the Main Toolbar you can quickly open the <guilabel>Find Object</guilabel>, <guilabel>Set Time</guilabel>
 or <guilabel>Set Geographic Location</guilabel> window.
-Main Toolbar can be configured using <guilabel>Settings -> Configure Toolbars...</guilabel> submenu.
+Main Toolbar can be configured using <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure Toolbars</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 </para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -777,12 +777,12 @@ Main Toolbar can be configured using <guilabel>Settings -> Configure Toolbars...
 <guisubmenu>Toolbars Shown</guisubmenu>
 <guimenuitem>View Toolbar</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
-<listitem><para>Toggle display of the View Toolbar. View Toolbar controls which sky objects are drawn on KStars Sky Map
+<listitem><para>Toggle display of the View Toolbar. View Toolbar controls which sky objects are drawn on &kstars; Sky Map
 (stars, deep sky objects, Solar system objects, supernovae or satellites) as well as what constellation information is 
 included (constellation lines, constellation names, constellation art or constellation boundaries). It also provides icon 
 shortcuts for: showing milky way (drawn with dark grey color), showing equatorial/horizontal coordinate grid and for showing
 the green opaque ground. Note that when the horizon is switched off, refraction effects are temporarily disabled.
-View Toolbar can be configured using <guilabel>Settings -> Configure Toolbars...</guilabel> submenu.
+View Toolbar can be configured using <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure Toolbars</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 </para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -795,18 +795,7 @@ View Toolbar can be configured using <guilabel>Settings -> Configure Toolbars...
 <listitem><para>Toggle display of the INDI Toolbar. By default, INDI Toolbar contains three shortcut icons:
 <guilabel>Toggle Ekos</guilabel>, <guilabel>Toggle INDI Control Panel</guilabel> and 
 <guilabel>Toggle FITS Viewer</guilabel>.
-INDI Toolbar can be configured using <guilabel>Settings -> Configure Toolbars...</guilabel> submenu.
-</para></listitem>
-</varlistentry>
-
-
-<varlistentry>
-<term><menuchoice>
-<guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
-<guisubmenu>Statusbar</guisubmenu>
-<guimenuitem>Show Statusbar</guimenuitem>
-</menuchoice></term>
-<listitem><para>Toggle display of the Statusbar.
+INDI Toolbar can be configured using <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure Toolbars</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
 </para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -872,12 +861,12 @@ the symbols list. You can also define your own symbols (or modify existing symbo
 <varlistentry>
 <term><menuchoice>
 <guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
-<guisubmenu>Artificial Horizon...</guisubmenu>
+<guisubmenu>Artificial Horizon</guisubmenu>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>
 If you select this submenu, then Artificial Horizon Manager will be opened. Artificial Horizon Manager 
 is used to define on the skymap one or more regions that are blocked from view from your current 
-location (i.e. tall trees or building). The window is split in two sections: in the left side is 
+location (&ie; tall trees or building). The window is split in two sections: in the left side is
 the Regions section while in the right side is the Points section. You can add a new region by pressing 
 <guibutton>+</guibutton> (Add Region) button or you can remove a region by selecting it in the regions 
 list and then pressing the <guibutton>-</guibutton> (Remove Region) button. In order to draw a region 
@@ -891,13 +880,13 @@ If you want to modify a point's coordinates, just double click on its Az/Alt tex
 the new value. First and Last points must be on the horizon.
 Polygons must be closed to be considered valid regions.
 Artificial Horizon Manager provides a easy way to rename your regions. By default, regions are 
-named as: "Region " plus an index (i.e. "Region 1" or "Region 2"). For renaming a region, all you need 
+named as: <quote>Region </quote> plus an index (&ie; <quote>Region 1</quote> or <quote>Region 2</quote>). For renaming a region, all you need
 to do is to double click on its name and then you will be invited to complete a new region name. 
 You can also control which regions are enabled or disabled for marking on the map by a simple 
 click on the checkbox in front of each region. After you defined your desired regions you can apply 
 them by pressing the <guibutton>Apply</guibutton> button.
 If you want to use these regions again, in further astronomy sessions, you can save them such that 
-next time when you will open KStars they will be automatically marked on the skymap.
+next time when you will open &kstars; they will be automatically marked on the skymap.
 </para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -908,7 +897,7 @@ next time when you will open KStars they will be automatically marked on the sky
 </shortcut>
 <guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
 <guisubmenu>Configure Observation Logging</guisubmenu>
-<guimenuitem>List your Equipment...</guimenuitem>
+<guimenuitem>List your Equipment</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>Allows you to define your equipment characteristics for observation logs.
 The Configure Equipment window is divided into four tabs: <guilabel>Telescope</guilabel>, 
@@ -925,13 +914,13 @@ button. You can also save or remove an equipment from the list.
 </shortcut>
 <guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
 <guisubmenu>Configure Observation Logging</guisubmenu>
-<guimenuitem>Manage Observer...</guimenuitem>
+<guimenuitem>Manage Observer</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>Selecting this will open Manage Observers window that enables you to register 
-a number of observers which are using KStars on this computer. You can add a new entry to 
+a number of observers which are using &kstars; on this computer. You can add a new entry to
 observers list by completing the mandatory fields: <guilabel>Name</guilabel> and <guilabel>Surname</guilabel>
 and then pressing the <guibutton>+</guibutton> (Add observer) button.
-Note that <guilabel>Contact</guilabel> field is optional, KStars allowing you to add a new observer 
+Note that <guilabel>Contact</guilabel> field is optional, &kstars; allowing you to add a new observer
 even though <guilabel>Contact</guilabel> text box is empty. 
 You can also remove an observer from the list using <guibutton>-</guibutton> (Remove observer) button.
 </para></listitem>
@@ -956,26 +945,6 @@ location</link>
 <varlistentry>
 <term><menuchoice>
 <guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
-<guimenuitem>Configure Shortcuts...</guimenuitem>
-</menuchoice></term>
-<listitem><para>
-TODO
-</para></listitem>
-</varlistentry>
-
-<varlistentry>
-<term><menuchoice>
-<guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
-<guimenuitem>Configure Toolbars...</guimenuitem>
-</menuchoice></term>
-<listitem><para>
-TODO
-</para></listitem>
-</varlistentry>
-
-<varlistentry>
-<term><menuchoice>
-<guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
 <guimenuitem>Configure &kstars;...</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>Modify <link linkend="config">configuration
@@ -985,7 +954,7 @@ options</link></para></listitem>
 <varlistentry>
 <term><menuchoice>
 <guimenu>Settings</guimenu>
-<guimenuitem>Startup Wizard...</guimenuitem>
+<guimenuitem>Startup Wizard</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>
 TODO
@@ -1086,7 +1055,7 @@ Print XPlanet view
 <term>[All]</term>
 <listitem><para>
 <guimenuitem>Show ... Image</guimenuitem>: download an image of the
-object from the internet, and display it in the Image Viewer tool.
+object from the Internet, and display it in the Image Viewer tool.
 The "..." text is replaced by a short description of the image's
 source.  An object may have multiple image links available in its
 popup menu.
diff --git a/doc/config.docbook b/doc/config.docbook
index 57c2b16..031b973 100644
--- a/doc/config.docbook
+++ b/doc/config.docbook
@@ -34,10 +34,10 @@ in the map.
 It is not practical to scroll through the full list of 3400 locations,
 looking for a specific city. To make searches easier, the list can be
 filtered by entering text in the boxes below the map. For example, in
-the screenshot, the text <quote>A</quote> appears in the
-<guilabel>City Filter</guilabel> box, while <quote>Te</quote> has been
+the screenshot, the text <userinput>A</userinput> appears in the
+<guilabel>City Filter</guilabel> box, while <userinput>Te</userinput> has been
 entered in the <guilabel>Province Filter</guilabel> box, and
-<quote>USA</quote> is in the <guilabel>Country Filter</guilabel>
+<userinput>USA</userinput> is in the <guilabel>Country Filter</guilabel>
 box. Note that all of the cities displayed in the list have city,
 province, and country names that begin with the entered filter
 strings, and that the message below the filter boxes indicates that 6
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ the new location.  Note that all fields except the optional
 location can be added to the list.  &kstars; will automatically load
 your custom locations for all future sessions.  Please note, at this
 point, the only way to remove a custom location is to remove the
-appropriate line from the file
-<filename>~/.kde/share/apps/kstars/mycities.dat</filename>.
+appropriate line from the file <filename>kstars/mycities.dat</filename>
+in your folder <userinput><command>qtpaths</command> <option>--paths GenericDataLocation</option></userinput>.
 </para><para>
 If you add custom locations (or modify existing ones), please send us
 your <filename>mycities.dat</filename> file so that we can add your
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ displaying the names and/or magnitudes of stars.  Below the stars section,
 the <guilabel>Deep-Sky Objects</guilabel> section controls the display of
 several non-stellar object catalogs.  By default, the list includes the
 Messier, NGC and IC catalogs.  You can add your own custom object catalogs
-by pressing the <guibutton>Import Catalog...</guibutton> or <guilabel>Load Catalog...</guilabel> button.  For
+by pressing the <guibutton>Import Catalog</guibutton> or <guilabel>Load Catalog</guilabel> button.  For
 detailed instructions on preparing a catalog data file, see the
 <filename>README.customize</filename> file that ships with &kstars;. It is possible to define
 faint limits for sky objects for zoomed in and zoomed out states of the rendering. When
@@ -192,11 +192,11 @@ light red filled circles with an optional dark red name label next to them. You
 these labels by checking or not the <guilabel>Show labels</guilabel> checkbox. It is located below
 the <guilabel>Show satellites</guilabel> checkbox, within the <guilabel>View options</guilabel> section. 
 The colors of the dots representing satellites and their name labels can be easily customized using 
-the <guilabel>Colors</guilabel> page from the same <guilabel>Configure &kstars;...</guilabel> window. 
+the <guilabel>Colors</guilabel> page from the same <guilabel>Configure &kstars;</guilabel> window.
 In addition, satellites can be drawn just like regular stars by checking the <guilabel>Draw satellites 
 like stars</guilabel> checkbox. To display only the visible satellites from your current geographic location 
 and time, select <guilabel>Show only visible satellites</guilabel>.
-&kstars; can draw artificial satellites from many predefined groups. Thus, you can select to display a particular 
+&kstars; can draw artificial satellites from many predefined groups. Thus, you can select to display a particular
 group, multiple groups or partially select subgroups. Under each group, a list of individual satellites is 
 presented. To select all satellites from a group, you need to check the group checkbox. You can also select 
 only the satellites of interest in each group.
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ As for satellites, the color of supernovae can be easily customized using the <g
 You can configure &kstars; to check for newly discovered supernovae on startup by checking the <guilabel>Check for 
 Recent Supernovae on Startup</guilabel> checkbox. This way, &kstars; will be always up-to-date with the most recent 
 supernovae. You can enable supernova alerts using the <guilabel>Enable Supernova alerts</guilabel> checkbox. Thus, 
-KStars will automatically alert you every time it learns of a new supernova in the sky. You can set the magnitude 
+&kstars; will automatically alert you every time it learns of a new supernova in the sky. You can set the magnitude
 limit for showing a supernova as well as magnitude limit for supernova alerts using the spin boxes control. The 
 limiting magnitude is the faintest apparent magnitude of an skyobject that is visible with the naked-eye or a telescope. 
 The list of recent supernovae can be updated via the internet by pressing the <guibutton>Update List of Recent 
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ background, <guilabel>Night Vision</guilabel>, which uses only shades
 of red in order to protect dark-adapted vision, and <guilabel>Moonless
 Night</guilabel>, a more realistic, dark theme.  Additionally,
 you can save the current color settings as a custom scheme by clicking
-the <guibutton>Save Current Colors...</guibutton> button.  It will prompt
+the <guibutton>Save Current Colors</guibutton> button.  It will prompt
 you for a name for the new scheme, and then your scheme will appear in
 the list in all future &kstars; sessions.  To remove a custom scheme,
 simply highlight it in the list, and press the <guibutton>Remove Color


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