Review Request 129621: proofread/update kalarm docbook for kf5

[Burkhard Lück]

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(Updated Dez. 10, 2016, 1:52 nachm.)


Review request for Documentation, KDEPIM and David Jarvie.


Changes
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remove Save from calendar actions
improve wording as suggested by David


Repository: kalarm


Description
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remove entities kappname + package, not used in kf5
bump date + releaseinfo
replace &kde; with &plasma; or remove &kde;
comment some options not found here, see FIXME
add missing option --triggerEvent
replace Help options with qt5options + kf5options
remove KResources related stuff
remove &reporting.bugs; + &updating.documentation;, not used in kf5
fix path for kalarm files
remove appendix installation, outdated
update screenshots


Diffs (updated)
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  doc/index.docbook 3592408 

Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/129621/diff/


Testing
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checkXML5 index.docbook


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Thanks,

Burkhard Lück

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