Review Request 128705: Update Glossary docbooks

[Luigi Toscano]

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doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 44)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66386>

    Maybe we could use something  generic, on the line of "based on the core libraries projects by the KDE community, currently KDE Frameworks and previously KDE Platform"



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 137)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66388>

    If Workspace refers to the old name of Plasma, shouldn't it be Workspaces?



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 175)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66389>

    Yes, IIRC "KDE Platform" is the official name of kdelibs4.



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 276)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66390>

    Workspace->Workspaces 
    Maybe I would add a line which explain what it does before the history (this was a problem even before)



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 299)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66391>

    Workspaces



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 324)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66392>

    See above



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 355)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66393>

    From Plasma 5 it's only Plasma. KDE Plasma Workspaces was the name in the Qt4 world.
    
    In fact, despite my comments above, we could focus on using only Plasma without the "Workspaces" part.



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 382)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66394>

    Most likely to be removed, yes



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 433)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66395>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 439)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66396>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 444)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66397>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 455)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66398>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 466)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66399>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 471)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66400>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 532)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66401>

    which resources?



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 558)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66402>

    See above for Workspace/Workspaces/none



doc/glossary/index.docbook (line 579)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66403>

    strigi does not exist in Frameworks 5 iirc. I would at least comment this out if not remove completely.



doc/glossary/kdeprintingglossary.docbook (line 41)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/#comment66404>

    I suspect that most of if not the entire document refer to kdeprint, which was not available even in the 4 lifecycle.


- Luigi Toscano


On Aug. 23, 2016, 11:43 a.m., Burkhard Lück wrote:
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> (Updated Aug. 23, 2016, 11:43 a.m.)
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> Review request for Documentation.
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> Repository: khelpcenter
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> Description
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> proofread + update
> add comments + questions inline
> please help to get this in good shape
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> Diffs
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>   doc/glossary/index.docbook 3732d95 
>   doc/glossary/kdeprintingglossary.docbook f9e03dc 
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> Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/128705/diff/
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> Testing
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> passes checkXML5
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> Thanks,
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> Burkhard Lück
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