[kde-doc-english] Review Request 127675: Update khelpcenter docbook to 16.04

[Luigi Toscano]

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doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook (line 52)
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/127675/#comment64335>

    insted of "as well as the native &plasma-workspaces; and applications documentation", what about something more generic, like "as well as the documentation of project from the &kde; community" ?



doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook (line 57)
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    I would remove "base", and maybe "All applications (including &plasma-workspaces;) from the &kde; community"...
    The exact wording depends whether the change above is applied or not.



doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook (line 260)
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    It existed already, but... "the core interface to the desktop"?


- Luigi Toscano


On Apr. 17, 2016, 10:12 p.m., Burkhard Lück wrote:
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> (Updated Apr. 17, 2016, 10:12 p.m.)
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> Review request for Documentation, Luigi Toscano and Pino Toscano.
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> Repository: khelpcenter
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> Description
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> proofread, update + add search feature
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> Diffs
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>   doc/khelpcenter/index.docbook b48f6c9 
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> Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/127675/diff/
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> Testing
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> passes checkXML5
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> Thanks,
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> Burkhard Lück
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