[kde-doc-english] [kate/KDE/4.12] doc/kate: Improvements to grammar, capitalization and clarity.
Yuri Chornoivan
yurchor at ukr.net
Tue Nov 19 17:04:19 UTC 2013
Git commit c2dd61b502e4932440b5a554a1ae887eee4bf5df by Yuri Chornoivan, on behalf of David Palser.
Committed on 19/11/2013 at 17:03.
Pushed by yurchor into branch 'KDE/4.12'.
Improvements to grammar, capitalization and clarity.
M +6 -6 doc/kate/vi.docbook
http://commits.kde.org/kate/c2dd61b502e4932440b5a554a1ae887eee4bf5df
diff --git a/doc/kate/vi.docbook b/doc/kate/vi.docbook
index c95cbce..9914e0b 100644
--- a/doc/kate/vi.docbook
+++ b/doc/kate/vi.docbook
@@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ for Vim and support all Vim’s features. Its aim is to make
the <quote>Vim way</quote> of text editing - and the Vim habits learned -
available for programs using the &kappname; text editor as their internal editor.</para>
-<para>The VI mode aims integrate nicely with the programs and deviate
+<para>The VI mode aims to integrate nicely with the program and deviate
from Vim’s behavior where it makes sense. For example,
<userinput><command>:w</command></userinput> will open a save dialog in &kappname;’s VI mode.</para>
-<para>To enable the VI input mode for all new views, go to
+<para>To enable the VI Input Mode for all new views, go to
<menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure &kappname;...</guimenuitem>
<guimenu>Editing</guimenu><guimenuitem>VI Input Mode</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
On this tab you can set options for the VI Input Mode and define and edit
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ disabled and press <keycap>Y</keycap>. To enter the <userinput>Y</userinput>
<para>This does not apply to commands that use the &Ctrl; key, which may be
entered regardless of <keycap>Caps Lock</keycap> mode and without pressing
-&Shift;. However, some commands require the use of &Ctrl;-key combination
+&Shift;. However, some commands require the use of a &Ctrl;-key combination
followed by another key which is case sensitive. For instance, to input
<quote><keycombo action="simul">&Ctrl;<keycap>W</keycap></keycombo>,
<userinput>h</userinput></quote> (switch to split view right) make sure
@@ -636,8 +636,8 @@ excluding the backticks</para></entry>
<para>This object is missing in Vim. The comma text object
makes it easy to modify parameter lists in C-like languages and other comma
separated lists. It is basically the area between two commas or between a comma
-and a bracket. In the line shown in the illustration to the right, the three
-ranges this text object can span are highlighted in red.</para>
+and a bracket. In the line shown in the illustration, the three
+ranges this text object can span are highlighted.</para>
<screenshot id="screenshot-resources">
<screeninfo>An example of Comma Text Object</screeninfo>
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ parameters.</para></caption>
<title>Missing Features</title>
<para>As stated earlier, the goal of &kappname;’s VI Mode is not to support 100% of
-Vim’s features, however, there are some features which are sorely missed:</para>
+Vim’s features. However, there are some features which are sorely missed:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Visual block mode - especially the ability to prepend/append text to the
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