[kde-doc-english] Review Request 111381: Documentation: Minor update to direct users to menu doc for the new detailed descriptions.

Burkhard Lück lueck at hube-lueck.de
Wed Jul 3 20:40:24 UTC 2013



> On July 3, 2013, 7:14 p.m., Burkhard Lück wrote:
> > doc/kmail/using-kmail.docbook, line 72
> > <http://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/111381/diff/1/?file=167875#file167875line72>
> >
> >     Minor nitpicking ;-)
> >     
> >     Configure &kmail;... is a <guimenuitem>
> >     
> >     Please compare 
> >     "...you can enable it in the <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu></menuchoice><guisubmenu>Configure &kmail;...</guisubmenu> ..."
> >     
> >     with
> >     
> >     "...you can enable it in the settings dialog..."
> >     
> >     Second form is probably more readable and do we really need to say how to open the settings dialog but mean the dialog itself?
> >
> 
> Scarlett Clark wrote:
>     Please check the new diff, I am not 100% sure what you mean here.

You got it, that is exacly what I meant.

Thanks.


- Burkhard


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On July 3, 2013, 8:02 p.m., Scarlett Clark wrote:
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> (Updated July 3, 2013, 8:02 p.m.)
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> Review request for Documentation, KDEPIM and Laurent Montel.
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> Description
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> Condensing detailed descriptions of headers and attachments to menus.docbook. This update merely directs users to the new location should they wish to see detailed descriptions.
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> Diffs
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>   doc/kmail/using-kmail.docbook 3f6a369 
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> Diff: http://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/111381/diff/
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> Testing
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> checkXML index.docbook
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> Thanks,
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> Scarlett Clark
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