[kde-doc-english] Review Request 114742: Add KBibTeX documentation
T.C. Hollingsworth
tchollingsworth at gmail.com
Mon Dec 30 19:15:40 UTC 2013
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Looks really good, just a few grammar nits.
You might have convinced me to use something better than LibreOffice + Zotero. ;-)
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33121>
Don't these two paragraphs basically say the same thing? :-)
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33122>
Please stick with one tense here at the end. (e.g. either "completion, compilation" or "completing, compiling") It reads awkwardly when you mix the two.
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33123>
editors -> editor
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33124>
Enter preamble -> Enter a preamble
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33125>
Choose entry encoding -> Choose an entry encoding
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33126>
missing a "using" between the description and the first <menuchoice> like the others in the list
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33127>
window looking similar -> window that looks similar
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33128>
choose -> choose the
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33129>
from &kbibtex; menu -> from the &kbibtex; menu
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33130>
for the referencing of the bibliography entry -> for referencing the bibliography entry
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33131>
Using of the -> Using the
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33132>
ABC order -> alphabetic order
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33133>
maybe explain what are entry labels? (complete LaTeX noob here :-)
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33134>
&latex; editor capabilities -> &latex; editor's capabilities
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33135>
see the results, &DVI; -> see the results as a &DVI;
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33136>
using <menuchoice> -> using the <menuchoice>
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33137>
using <link -> using the <link
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33149>
current selected -> currently selected
Since there are a few of these, I guess I should mention, this is only wrong in the few areas I point out because you need the "-ly" when "current" describes a verb, as in "currently selected" or when it describes another adjective, as in "currently active". Many of the "current"s in this doc describe a noun, like "current bibliography", which is correct. (Ugh, English. :-p)
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33139>
is lowercasing -> will lowercase
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33140>
perform search -> perform a search
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33148>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33141>
perform search -> perform a search
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33142>
visit database homepage -> visit the database homepage
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33150>
current selected -> currently selected
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33151>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33152>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33153>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33146>
the toolbars customization -> customizing the toolbars
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33147>
creates new -> creates a new
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33154>
current active -> currently active
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33155>
current active -> currently active
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33156>
current open -> currently open
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33157>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33158>
in the large -> in large
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33159>
current opened -> currently opened
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33160>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33161>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33162>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33163>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33164>
current selected -> currently selected
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33165>
current selected -> currently selected
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33166>
current selected -> currently selected
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33167>
via Preferences dialog -> via the Preferences dialog
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33168>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33169>
Color labels is -> Color labels are
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33170>
current selected -> currently selected
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33171>
identifiers suggestion schemes -> identifier suggestion schemes
doc/index.docbook
<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33172>
make &kbibtex; to show -> make &kbibtex; show
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33173>
click on -> click on the
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33174>
Click on Apply button -> Click on the Apply button
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33175>
on -> on the
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33176>
use <guimenuitem -> use the <guimenuitem
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33177>
from &lyx; main menu -> from the &lyx; main menu
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33178>
there you want -> where you want
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<https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33179>
use a package manager -> use the package manager
- T.C. Hollingsworth
On Dec. 30, 2013, 6:01 p.m., Yuri Chornoivan wrote:
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> (Updated Dec. 30, 2013, 6:01 p.m.)
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> Review request for Documentation and Thomas Fischer.
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> Repository: kbibtex
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> Description
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> A brief documentation including man page (converted from previous untranslatable version).
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> Diffs
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> doc/new-document.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/online-search.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/reference-preview.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/search-results.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/statistics.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/svn-update.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/tools-check-spelling.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/view-filter.png PRE-CREATION
> man/CMakeLists.txt 3c5b808
> man/kbibtex.1 ce67b21
> doc/list-remove.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/lyx-preferences.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/main-toolbar.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/man-kbibtex.1.docbook PRE-CREATION
> doc/media-playback-start.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/CMakeLists.txt PRE-CREATION
> doc/add-macro-source.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/add-macro.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/application-pdf.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/applications-internet.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/code-context.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-color.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-general.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-id-suggestions.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-keywords.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-pdf.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-saving.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/config-user-interface.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/configure.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/cross-ref.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/document-open-remote.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/document-open.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/document-preview.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/document-revert.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/document-save.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/draw-text.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/edit-clear-locationbar-rtl.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/edit-element.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/edit-undo.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/element-editor.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/external-tab.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/favorites.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/file-settings.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/filter-toolbar.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/find-pdf.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/first-run.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/flag.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/go-down.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/go-up.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/index.docbook PRE-CREATION
> doc/list-add.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/list-of-documents.png PRE-CREATION
> doc/list-of-values.png PRE-CREATION
> CMakeLists.txt 194ba74
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> Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/diff/
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> Testing
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> EBN, checkXML, compilation, installation. Thomas Fischer did not object to the general concept of the manual when discussing it via email.
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> PDF version to ease up reviewing is available here:
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> https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/55247264/kbibtex.pdf
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> Thanks,
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> Yuri Chornoivan
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