[kde-doc-english] Doc for a new app

[Malcolm Hunter]

> It would be nice if an English-speaking person would review the doc as nor
> Mehrdad nor me are English and some sentences are a bit dodgy.
> It's in kdereview/doc/choqok file index.docbook

Patch attached - sorry, no svn access from work.

Regards,
Malcolm


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< send brief text updates or micro media such as photos or audio clips and publish
< them, either to be viewed by anyone or by a restricted group which can be chosen
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> send brief text updates or micro media, such as photos or audio clips, and publish
> them. These can be viewed either by anyone or by a restricted group, which can be decided
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< <title>Getting started</title>
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> <title>Getting Started</title>
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< <para>In &choqok; main window there are some time-lines you can see what
< your friends posted, replies to them and direct messages sent and
< received from friends. And you can post a new message.</para>
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> <para>In the &choqok; main window there are some timelines allowing you to see what
> your friends have posted, replies to them and direct messages sent and
> received from friends. You can also post a new message.</para>
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< <screeninfo>Here's a screenshot of &choqok; main window</screeninfo>
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> <screeninfo>Here is a screenshot of the &choqok; main window</screeninfo>
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< the service search api can offer to a client).</para>
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> the service-search API can offer to a client).</para>
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< <para>This function is available via <menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu>
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> <para>This function is available via the <menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu>
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< <keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>)
< For example you can search for a special word in all users posts:</para>
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> <keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>).
> For example, you can search for a special word in all users' posts:</para>
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< <title>Configuring an account</title>
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> <title>Configuring an Account</title>
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< <para>Open &choqok; configuration window via
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> <para>Open the &choqok; configuration window via
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< button, the <guilabel>Add a new account</guilabel> window will appear.
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> button. The <guilabel>Add a new account</guilabel> window will appear.
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< <para>Simply enter your desired, unique alias, username and password and click
< the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button. This will check your credentials and if
< everything is right, your account will be ready to use.</para>
< <para>You can configure other accounts after it.</para>
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> <para>Simply enter your desired unique alias, username and password and click
> the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button. This will check your credentials and, if
> everything is okay, your account will be ready to use.</para>
> <para>You can configure other accounts subsequently.</para>
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< <title>Special features</title>
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> <title>Special Features</title>
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< your posts and your friends posts). 
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> posts by you and your friends).
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< When new posts are received &choqok; marks them as unread and shows the number
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> When new posts are received, &choqok; marks them as unread and shows the number
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< <guimenuitem>Show Statusbar</guimenuitem>
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> <guimenuitem>Show Status bar</guimenuitem>
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< <listitem><para><action>Toggle</action> the statusbar.</para></listitem>
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> <listitem><para><action>Toggle</action> the status bar.</para></listitem>
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< <title>How to obtain &choqok;</title>
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> <title>How to Obtain &choqok;</title>
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< <title>Compilation and installation</title>
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> <title>Compilation and Installation</title>