[kde-doc-english] Fw: Typo in kpat doc

[Richard]

Hi,

I agree it should probably be corrected before the next revision, 
Luciano. I'm forwarding your mail to the kde-doc-english list who deal 
with this.

Actually the current manual (and game) KPatience v3.0 / 
docs.kde.org/development/en/kdegames/kpat/index.html, which is the one 
that error appears in, is much changed since I last looked at it. I 
don't currently have a KDE development installation or svn access - 
the last version I played was KDE 3.5x's - KPatience 2.2.2. I'm sure 
someone on the list will be able to look into it though. Thanks for 
reporting it. =)

list: While I'm not currently working on KDE docs, I did have a quick 
look at the doc. x2 diffs are attached for review. Please consider 
these patches _untested_. (I should think they'll be fine, since the 
first is purely text changes; the second one is also minor).

attached diffs:
1) Typo Luciano reported, plus a bunch of others I noticed while being 
insomniac-y. =)
2) Rev. 773151 (coolo) removed the description of game types 
'calculation' and 'napoleon's tomb', since those were removed from the 
game. The menu synopsis part still references them though. This patch 
removes those references. ...Again, bear in mind I haven't played 
version 3.

notes:
- There are a bunch of typos/spelling mistakes in the SGML comments. 
It's still clear what is meant. I didn't change these, as I imagine 
they're from a template somewhere.
- If possible please could somebody change my name/email under 
contributors to use the entities? There seems to be a reference in 
kdelibs/kdoctools/customization/entities/contributor.entities for me. 
I didn't change it myself since I can't test it.

Thanks,

Richard.

-- 
Richard Hawthorne

--- On 9/24/08, Luciano Montanaro <mikelima@[removed]> wrote:

> From: Luciano Montanaro <mikelima@[removed]> (bcc'd)
> Subject: Typo in kpat doc
> To: [me]
> Date: Wednesday, September 24, 2008 
> Hi, I'm reviewing the italian translation of kpat doc
> for next version, and > I've noticed this odd phrase in one of 
> the first messages:
> 
> "As &kappname; offers you a multiplicity of
> different solitaire games, there  is no straightforward how-to 
> which could feet all of them."
> 
> Here I imagine "feet" should really be "fit". Now is not the 
> time to change the message, but maybe it should be corrected 
> before next minor revision, what do you think?
> 
> Ciao,
> Luciano 
> 
> -- 
> Luciano Montanaro // \X/ mikelima@[removed]
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