[kde-doc-english] Typos in fsview and mouse docbooks

Philip Rodrigues philip.rodrigues at lincoln.ox.ac.uk
Sun Sep 21 18:44:25 CEST 2008


> Committed, thanks, but I am unsure about this change and did not commit it:
>
> kdebase-workspace/kcontrol/mouse
> - If you have additional cursor themes available to you, you
> + If you have additional cursor themes, you
>
> Could some of the native english speaker please comment this issue?

Either form is correct, although the first one is very slightly awkward 
because of the two "you"s next to each other. I would probably change it to:

If you have additional cursor themes available, you

Regards,
Philip



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