[kde-doc-english] [Bug 97374] JJ: KGet: update menu reference, doc configuration dialog

[Philip Rodrigues]

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             Status|NEW                         |RESOLVED
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------- Additional Comments From phil kde org  2007-03-18 14:00 -------
SVN commit 643794 by philrod:

Updated documentation and screenshots from Rohan Dhruva. Thanks!

BUG:97374



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--- trunk/KDE/kdenetwork/doc/kget/index.docbook #643793:643794
 @ -41,8 +41,7  @
 
 <abstract>
 <para>
-&kget; allows you to group downloads. In some cases, &kget; can resume these
-downloads even if you shutdown your computer before the downloads have completed.
+&kget; is &kde;'s download manager, designed to be user friendly and versatile.
 </para>
 </abstract>
 
 @ -56,24 +55,27  @
 
 </bookinfo>
 
-<chapter id="introduction">
-<title>Introduction</title>
-
+<chapter id="quickstart">
+<title>Quick-start Guide</title>
 <para>
-To download a document or package, drag and drop the &URL; on to &kget;.
-
+  <orderedlist>
+    <listitem><para>Start &kget;.</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Drag and drop the required &URL; in the &kget; window.</para></listitem>
+  </orderedlist>
 </para>
 </chapter>
 
+
 <chapter id="using-kget">
 <title>Using &kget;</title>
 
 <sect1 id="kget-features">
 <title>&kget; Tutorial</title>
 
-<para>Here is a brief tutorial that uses some of the features of &kget;. Below
-are three software packages that are to be downloaded. Suppose you want to 
-download the middle one first and then the top and bottom ones second. 
+<para>Here is a brief tutorial that demonstrates some of the features of
+  &kget;. The screenshot shows three software packages that are to be
+  downloaded. This tutorial lists the procedure to download the middle
+  one first, and then the other two.
 </para>
 
 
 @ -88,8 +90,8  @
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Click on the top entry with the &LMB;. Hold down the &Ctrl; key and click on
-the bottom entry. &kget; should look similar to this:
+Click on the first file with the &LMB;. Hold down the &Ctrl; key and click on
+the bottom most file. The &kget; window should look similar to this:
 
 <screenshot>
 <screeninfo>Screenshot of Kget</screeninfo>
 @ -108,7 +110,7  @
 </listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Click on the delay button to prevent these items from being
+Click on the <guibutton>Delay</guibutton> button to prevent these items from being
 downloaded.
 </para></listitem>
 
 @ -129,13 +131,13  @
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Put &kget; back online by unchecking
+Put &kget; back into the online mode by unchecking
 <menuchoice><guimenu>Options</guimenu><guimenuitem>Offline
-Mode</guimenuitem></menuchoice> and &kget; will download the middle item.
+Mode</guimenuitem></menuchoice> and &kget; will download the middle file.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Click on the top item, hold down the &Shift; key and click on the bottom item. &kget;
+Click on the top item, hold down the &Shift; key and click on the bottom item. The &kget; window
 should look like this:
 <screenshot>
 <screeninfo>Screenshot of Kget</screeninfo>
 @ -201,6 +203,10  @
 <userinput><command>/usr/sbin/usernetctl 
 <parameter>ppp0</parameter> <option>down</option></command></userinput></para>
 </listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>
+Users of other distributions, please check the documentation included with your distribution for the appropriate command.
+</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
 </sect1>
 @ -523,7 +529,7  @
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2>
-<title>The Options Menu</title>
+  <title>The <guimenu>Options</guimenu> Menu</title>
 
 <variablelist>
 
 @ -630,8 +636,8  @
 <guimenuitem>Drop Target</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem><para>The drop target is a desktop icon that allows for
-hiding and restoring of &kget;. This is used on a cluttered desktop when you
-want to periodically check the status of a download.</para></listitem>
+hiding and restoring of &kget;. Also, download links can be dragged-and-dropped
+onto this drop target, to add it to the download queue.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
 @ -640,7 +646,7  @
 <guimenuitem>Configure Shortcuts...</guimenuitem>
 </menuchoice></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Display the the familiar &kde; Keyboard Shortcut Configuration
+<para>Display the the &kde; Keyboard Shortcut Configuration
 Dialog.</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 @ -652,7 +658,7  @
 </menuchoice>
 </term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Display the the familiar &kde; Toolbar Configuration Dialog.</para>
+<para>Display the the &kde; Toolbar Configuration Dialog.</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 @ -664,7 +670,7  @
 </menuchoice>
 </term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Launch the main configuration dialog.</para>
+<para>Launch the main &kget; configuration dialog.</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </variablelist>
 @ -705,6 +711,9  @
 Documentation Copyright &copy; 2003 &Jonathan.Drews; &Jonathan.Drews.mail;
 </para>
 
+<para>Documentation Copyright &copy; 2007 Rohan B. Dhruva <email>rohandhruva gmail com</email></para>
+
+
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