[kde-doc-english] [Bug 136472] New: Typos and oopsies in KDM docs

Natalie nat at switch.demon.nl
Sun Oct 29 20:23:54 CET 2006


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           Summary: Typos and oopsies in KDM docs
           Product: docs
           Version: unspecified
          Platform: unspecified
        OS/Version: Linux
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: NOR
         Component: general
        AssignedTo: kde-doc-english kde org
        ReportedBy: nat switch demon nl


Version:            (using KDE KDE 3.5.2)
OS:                Linux

kdm.po

This doc seems to be rather outdated, 
(Documentation extended and revised for &kde; 2.2 by &Oswald.Buddenhagen; 
&Oswald.Buddenhagen.mail;. Last update August, 2001)

  - In most cases: runlevel
  In a few cases: run-level

  - sometimes X11, sometimes x11


index.docbook:145

  - more fully in<xref 

  - more fully in <xref 


index.docbook:208

  - the <guilabel>Login</guilabel> and <guilabel>Pass</guilabel> fields.

  - Shouldn't this be:
  the <guilabel>Username:</guilabel> and <guilabel>Password:</guilabel> fields.


index.docbook:214

  - the <guibutton>Shutdown</guibutton> dialog box.

  - the <guilabel>Shutdown</guilabel> dialog box.


index.docbook:214

(Optionally) A <guibutton>Shutdown</guibutton> button that displays the 
<guibutton>Shutdown</guibutton> dialog box.

and

index.docbook:247

(Optionally) A <guibutton>Shutdown...</guibutton> button that displays the 
shutdown dialog box.

  - Two descriptions of the same button ?


index.docbook:223

  - a <guimenuitem>Restart X Server</guimenuitem> item

  - A <guimenuitem>Restart X Server</guimenuitem> item


index.docbook:382

  - click the <guibutton>Administrator Mode</guibutton> Button.

  - click the <guibutton>Administrator Mode...</guibutton> button.


index.docbook:424, 476, 740

  - labelled

  - labeled


index.docbook:455

  - <guilabel>Greeting</guilabel>).

  - <guilabel>Greeting:</guilabel>).


index.docbook:490

  - the tab labeled <guilabel>Wallpaper</guilabel>

  - In previous version maybe?


index.docbook:623

  - Use these drop down box 

  - Use this drop down box 


index.docbook:643

  - The restart command 

  - The <guillabel>Restart:</guilabel> command 


index.docbook:815

  - The runlevel with graphical login (&xdm;) for
  some common &Linux; distributions are:

  - The runlevel with graphical login (&xdm;) for
  some common &Linux; distributions is:



kdmrc-ref.po


  - host name in most cases, some occurences of hostname


kdmrc-ref.docbook:874, 891, 906, 921

  - The conventional name for a file used here is
  <command>...</command>. 

  - Could this be changed to "a program" to avoid confusion? 


kdmrc-ref.docbook:1270

  - GUIStyle should be updated.


kdmrc-ref.docbook:1281

  - ColorScheme should be updated.


kdmrc-ref.docbook:1492

  - If it is <literal>NotHidden</literal>, the initial user list 
  are all users found on the system.
 
  - If it is <literal>NotHidden</literal>, the initial user list 
  contains all users found on the system.


kdmrc-ref.docbook:1674, 1678

  - is shown for every typed letter

  - is shown for every typed character



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