[kde-doc-english] [Bug 137785] Typos in two kdebase docs,

Anne-Marie Mahfouf annma at kde.org
Fri Nov 24 10:48:31 CET 2006 

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------- Additional Comments From annma kde org  2006-11-24 10:48 -------
SVN commit 607358 by annma:

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 M  +50 -23    index.docbook  
 AM            screenshot1.png  


--- trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/knetattach/index.docbook #607357:607358
 @ -1,5 +1,6  @
 <?xml version="1.0" ?>
-<!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//KDE//DTD DocBook XML V4.2-Based Variant V1.1//EN" "dtd/kdex.dtd" [
+<!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//KDE//DTD DocBook XML V4.2-Based Variant V1.1//EN"
+"dtd/kdex.dtd" [
   <!-- Define an entity for your application if it is not part of KDE
        CVS -->
   <!ENTITY kappname "&knetattach;">
 @ -65,7 +66,7  @
 The &knetattach; program, affectionately and hereafter known as the 
 Network Folder Wizard, allows easy addition and integration of various 
 network folders with your &kde; desktop. Please report any problems or 
-feature requests for it to the &kde; mailing lists.
+feature requests for it to the &kde; bugs website.
 </para>
 </chapter>
 
 @ -73,10 +74,12  @
 <title>Using &knetattach;</title>
 
 <para>
-As you will see in the screenshot below, the Network Folder Wizard currently allows 
+As you will see in the screenshot below, the Network Folder Wizard currently
+allows 
 you to add four types of network folders: WebDav, FTP, 
 <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark> 
-<trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark> (Samba) network drives and SSH.
+<trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark> (Samba) network drives and
+SSH.
 
 <screenshot>
 <screeninfo>Here's a screenshot of &knetattach;</screeninfo>
 @ -99,22 +102,40  @
 <title>Adding network folders</title>
 
 <para>
-Network folders show up in a special location of konqueror called a <emphasis>virtual folder</emphasis>.
-This virtual folder is accessed by typing <userinput>remote:/</userinput> in the 
-<interface>Location bar</interface>. You will then be able to see any folders which have been 
-previously added or use the wizard to add new ones.
+Network folders show up in a special location of &konqueror; called a
+<emphasis>virtual folder</emphasis>.
+This virtual folder is accessed by typing <userinput>remote:/</userinput> in
+&konqueror; <interface>Location bar</interface>. You will then be able to see
+any folders which have been previously added and you also will be able to use
+the wizard to add new ones.
+<screenshot>
+<screeninfo>Here's a screenshot of &knetattach;</screeninfo>
+<mediaobject>
+<imageobject>
+<imagedata fileref="screenshot1.png" format="PNG"/>
+</imageobject>
+<textobject>
+<phrase>Screenshot</phrase>
+</textobject>
+<caption>
+<para>The virtual folder with the Network Folder wizard</para>
+</caption>
+</mediaobject>
+</screenshot>
 </para>
+
 <para>
-Speaking of wizards, the Network Folder Wizard aims at being very easy to use. Don't worry if 
-you are having some problems though, that's what we're here for. :-)
-After opening the wizard you must choose the type of network folder you would like to
-access. When you move on to the next screen you will just need to 
-fill in the requested information and the worst will be over.  The final step is entering your 
-username and login password for the network share you've chosen to access.
+Speaking of wizards, the Network Folder Wizard aims at being very easy to use.
+After opening the wizard you must choose the type of network folder you would
+like to access. When you move on to the next screen you will just need to 
+fill in the requested information. The final step is entering your username and
+login password for the network share you've chosen to access.
 </para>
 <para>
-Below is a list of the information needed by the wizard to create the network folders. If an option is not 
-available for a particular folder it does not have to be entered. e.g. The Samba folders do not require a <guilabel>Port</guilabel> entry.
+Below is a list of the information needed by the wizard to create the network
+folders. If an option is not 
+available for a particular folder it does not have to be entered. e.g. The Samba
+folders do not require a <guilabel>Port</guilabel> entry.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 @ -129,7 +150,7  @
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 <varlistentry>
-<term>Server</term>
+<term>Server:</term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
 This is the address of the server you are attempting to add. It can be an 
 @ -169,8 +190,10  @
 but it will not be accessible from remote:/.
 <note>
 <para>
-The <guilabel>Recent connection:</guilabel> option allows you to re-connect to the 
-last network mount point you connected to using the wizard whether an icon is created or not.
+The <guilabel>Recent connection:</guilabel> option allows you to re-connect to
+the 
+last network mount point you connected to using the wizard whether an icon is
+created or not.
 </para>
 </note>
 </para>
 @ -226,14 +249,16  @
 <para>
 OK, so we (as in me) have chosen to add an FTP folder. Below you see
 an example of the type of information you will need to add for your particular 
-FTP server. After filling it in we press <guibutton>Save &amp; Copy</guibutton> 
+FTP server. After filling it in we press <guibutton>Save &amp;
+Connect</guibutton> 
 and wait for the magic. Oh yes, if your server requires validation of some kind
 you will be prompted at this point before being allowed to connect.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 <screenshot>
-<screeninfo>Screenshot showing addition of FTP Folder &knetattach;</screeninfo>
+<screeninfo>Screenshot showing addition of FTP Folder
+using &knetattach;</screeninfo>
 <mediaobject>
 <imageobject>
 <imagedata fileref="screenshot2.png" format="PNG"/>
 @ -264,13 +289,15  @
 </para>
 
 <para>
-To get back to our network folders all that is necessary is typing <action>remote:/</action>
+To get back to our network folders all that is necessary is typing
+<action>remote:/</action>
 in the <guilabel>Location:</guilabel> bar of &konqueror;.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 <screenshot>
-<screeninfo>Screenshot of the remote:/ virtual folder</screeninfo>
+<screeninfo>Screenshot of the remote:/ virtual folder with the
+added connection</screeninfo>
 <mediaobject>
 <imageobject>
 <imagedata fileref="screenshot4.png" format="PNG"/>
** trunk/KDE/kdebase/doc/knetattach/screenshot1.png #property svn:mime-type
   + image/png

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