http://www.kde.org/info/requirements/3.5.php (typos & stuff)
Kuba Ober
kuba at mareimbrium.org
Mon Sep 19 18:16:34 BST 2005
Some typos/minor linguistic issues are below. Those are random picks.
"It provides greater compression, but is substantially slower, than gzip."
-> "Compared to gzip, it provides greater compression while being
substantially slower."
"Berkely DB IV" -> "Berkeley DB 4"
"FAM makes this process greatly more efficient." -> "FAM makes this process
more efficient."
"mDNS is a daemon developed by Apple which needed for KDE's service discovery
feature" -> "mDNS is a daemon needed for KDE's service discovery feature"
"FAM is a server which tracks changes to the filesystem and relays these
changes to interested applications efficiently by either consolidating
polling for all applications or, with kernel-level support, obtaining kernel
notifications of file system changes." ->
"FAM is a server which tracks changes to the filesystem and relays these
changes to interested applications. It is efficient by either consolidating
the polling for all applications, or, with kernel support, obtaining kernel
notifications of file system changes."
Cheers, Kuba
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