http://www.kde.org/info/requirements/3.5.php (typos & stuff)

Kuba Ober kuba at mareimbrium.org
Mon Sep 19 18:16:34 BST 2005


Some typos/minor linguistic issues are below. Those are random picks.

"It provides greater compression, but is substantially slower, than gzip."
-> "Compared to gzip, it provides greater compression while being 
substantially slower."

"Berkely DB IV" -> "Berkeley DB 4"

"FAM makes this process greatly more efficient." -> "FAM makes this process 
more efficient."

"mDNS is a daemon developed by Apple which needed for KDE's service discovery 
feature" -> "mDNS is a daemon needed for KDE's service discovery feature"

"FAM is a server which tracks changes to the filesystem and relays these 
changes to interested applications efficiently by either consolidating 
polling for all applications or, with kernel-level support, obtaining kernel 
notifications of file system changes." -> 
"FAM is a server which tracks changes to the filesystem and relays these 
changes to interested applications. It is efficient by either consolidating 
the polling for all applications, or, with kernel support, obtaining kernel 
notifications of file system changes."

Cheers, Kuba




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