[kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
thomas.pfeiffer at kde.org
Sat Mar 19 21:07:24 UTC 2016
On Samstag, 19. März 2016 21:52:09 CET Michael Brade wrote:
> Am 19.03.2016 um 21:30 schrieb Alexander Neundorf:
> > On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote:
> > ...
> >> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis:
> >> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys
> >> freedom and privacy."
> > How about one more tweak ?
> > "A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom
> > and privacy."
One can "manage" something without having full control over it, so I'd like us
to keep the control part in there.
> Well, that's two tweaks (SCNR ;)
> But I like the idea, so how about really just one tweak: getting rid of
> the double "and":
> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life, enjoying
> freedom and privacy."
Makes it even better!
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