Marketing Message for Calligra

[Adam C.]

to me the design looks a little bit like hastily cobbled together. the  
elements are not aligned, there is no contrast and the different font  
types are fighting each other. there are to many elements, especially for  
navigation (the apps, the top right menu, device selector and the monitor).

of course also i am not a designer, but we had some lessons in university  
on this topic, so i tried to quickly stick something together.
http://wstaw.org/m/2011/12/22/calligrahp__.png

this is far from perfect, it could use some more contrast, the fonts  
should be consistent, and the bottom news area is lifeless (could use some  
graphics there).

this message is intended to be constructive, please don't feel offended or  
something.

the other points (content etc) are still valid.

greets, adam


On Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:21:12 +0100, Jaroslaw Staniek <staniek at kde.org>  
wrote:

> Update:
> http://kexi-project.org/pics/ads/calligra/web-page/web-page-mockup9.png
>
> - After intense 'research' with Inge added What is Calligra? link below  
> the logo
> - Mocked up the life stream section and the aligned the main area
>


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