Announcement draft

[Elvis Stansvik]

2011/4/26 C. Boemann <cbo at boemann.dk>:
> On Tuesday 26 April 2011 18:20:49 Jaroslaw Staniek wrote:
>> On 26 April 2011 16:06, Inge Wallin <inge at lysator.liu.se> wrote:
>> > On Tuesday, April 26, 2011 16:00:52 Inge Wallin wrote:
>> >> Here is a first draft of the announcement of snapshot 1.  I have already
>> >> had some feedback from Cyrille that I incorporated.
>> >>
>> >> Please comment on the overall structure (is this what we want to focus
>> >> on?) as well as the actual content.  Also remember that this is a first
>> >> draft that will be polished over the next few days.
>> >>
>> >> When we have the screenshots and visual tour on the website, I will also
>> >> add references to those.
>> >>
>> >>       -Inge
>> >
>> > Based on feedback from my first draft, I have embellished it a bit.  Here
>> > is a longer version. :-P
>>
>> Nice work!
>> First, one thing: I'd like to propose to have two messages: to users
>> and developers. Only the latter would mention GUI/engine separation
>> and stuff like that. If we start doing the separation for any
>> announcement, we can escape from the 'geek' area.
>> Simple test: just give the text to read to your family and see what's
>> a like black magic to them, then improve incrementally.
> Very good point. 100% agree

+1. Apart from that I think it's very good. I'd s/calligra
suite/Calligra Suite/ on line 2 though.

Elvis

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