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<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; "> Widgets
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">already added by <a href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15520" style="background-color: #e7e7e7;
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color: black;text-decoration: none;">D15520: Upgrade SimpleIpV4AddressValidator and SimpleIpV6AddressValidator</a></p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84022">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguard.cpp:139</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">WireGuardKeyValidator</span> <span class="n">keyValidator</span><span class="p">(</span><span style="color: #aa4000">this</span><span class="p">);</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span style="color: #aa4000">int</span> <span class="n">keyPos</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">=</span> <span style="color: #601200">0</span><span class="p">;</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">no need to specify <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">this</tt> as parent, since it is on stack, and thus it will be deleted automatically</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84021">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguard.cpp:139-140</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">WireGuardKeyValidator</span> <span class="n">keyValidator</span><span class="p">(</span><span style="color: #aa4000">this</span><span class="p">);</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span style="color: #aa4000">int</span> <span class="n">keyPos</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">=</span> <span style="color: #601200">0</span><span class="p">;</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">indent</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84023">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguard.cpp:177</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span style="color: #aa4000">if</span> <span class="p">(</span><span style="color: #aa2211">!</span><span class="n">value</span><span class="p">.</span><span class="n">isEmpty</span><span class="p">())</span> <span class="p">{</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span style="color: #aa4000">int</span> <span class="n">pos</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">=</span> <span style="color: #601200">0</span><span class="p">;</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">SimpleIpListValidator</span> <span style="color: #004012">validator</span><span class="p">(</span><span style="color: #aa4000">this</span><span class="p">,</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">since earlier there is a <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">keyPos</tt> variable used for basically the same purpose (i.e. passing it to the <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">validate()</tt> of validators), just move <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">pos</tt> earlier in the function, and use one everywhere</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84024">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardadvancedwidget.cpp:26</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><QStandardPaths></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><QUrl></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">unused</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84026">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardadvancedwidget.cpp:31</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><KLocalizedString></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><KProcess></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><KAcceleratorManager></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">unused</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84029">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardadvancedwidget.cpp:120</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">NMStringMap</span> <span class="n">data</span><span class="p">;</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span style="color: #aa4000">long</span> <span class="n">intVal</span><span class="p">;</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">QString</span> <span class="n">stringVal</span><span class="p">;</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">a bit confusing to call <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">intVal</tt> a variable which is (not correctly) a long; OTOH, it can be removed altogether (see below)</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84030">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardadvancedwidget.cpp:121</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span style="color: #aa4000">long</span> <span class="n">intVal</span><span class="p">;</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">QString</span> <span class="n">stringVal</span><span class="p">;</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">unused</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84031">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardadvancedwidget.cpp:123-127</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">intVal</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">=</span> <span class="n">m_ui</span><span style="color: #aa2211">-></span><span class="n">listenPortSpinBox</span><span style="color: #aa2211">-></span><span class="n">value</span><span class="p">();</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">setOrClear</span><span class="p">(</span><span class="n">data</span><span class="p">,</span> <span class="n">QLatin1String</span><span class="p">(</span><span class="n">NM_WG_KEY_LISTEN_PORT</span><span class="p">),</span> <span class="n">intVal</span><span class="p">);</span>
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</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">intVal</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">=</span> <span class="n">m_ui</span><span style="color: #aa2211">-></span><span class="n">mtuSpinBox</span><span style="color: #aa2211">-></span><span class="n">value</span><span class="p">();</span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"> <span class="n">setOrClear</span><span class="p">(</span><span class="n">data</span><span class="p">,</span> <span class="n">QLatin1String</span><span class="p">(</span><span class="n">NM_WG_KEY_MTU</span><span class="p">),</span> <span class="n">intVal</span><span class="p">);</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">just inline the calls to <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">value()</tt>, just like done below</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84025">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardadvancedwidget.h:27</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><QDialog></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
</div><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span style="color: #304a96">#include</span> <span class="cpf"><QProcess></span><span style="color: #304a96"></span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">unused</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-84032">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardkeyvalidator.h:26</span></div>
<div style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; white-space: pre-wrap; clear: both; padding: 4px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="padding: 0 8px; margin: 0 4px; background: rgba(151, 234, 151, .6);"><span class="n">class</span> <span class="n">Q_DECL_EXPORT</span> <span style="color: #a0a000">WireGuardKeyValidator</span> <span class="p">:</span> <span class="n">public</span> <span class="n">QValidator</span>
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<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">no need for <tt style="background: #ebebeb; font-size: 13px;">Q_DECL_EXPORT</tt>, as it is in a plugin, and thus it does not need to be exported as public symbol</p></div></div><br /><div style="border: 1px solid #C7CCD9; border-radius: 3px;"><div style="padding: 0; background: #F7F7F7; border-color: #e3e4e8; border-style: solid; border-width: 0 0 1px 0; margin: 0;"><div style="color: #74777d; background: #eff2f4; padding: 6px 8px; overflow: hidden;"><a style="float: right; text-decoration: none;" href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093#inline-82763">View Inline</a><span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">pino</span> wrote in <span style="color: #4b4d51; font-weight: bold;">wireguardwidget.cpp:182</span></div>
<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px; color: #74777D;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">no need for the (...) for the whole condition:</p>
<div class="remarkup-code-block" style="margin: 12px 0;" data-code-lang="c++" data-sigil="remarkup-code-block"><pre class="remarkup-code" style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; padding: 12px; margin: 0; background: rgba(71, 87, 120, 0.08);"><span style="color: #aa4000">return</span> <span class="n">foo</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">||</span> <span class="n">bar</span><span class="p">;</span></pre></div>
<p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">is easier than</p>
<div class="remarkup-code-block" style="margin: 12px 0;" data-code-lang="c++" data-sigil="remarkup-code-block"><pre class="remarkup-code" style="font: 11px/15px "Menlo", "Consolas", "Monaco", monospace; padding: 12px; margin: 0; background: rgba(71, 87, 120, 0.08);"><span style="color: #aa4000">return</span> <span class="p">(</span><span class="n">foo</span> <span style="color: #aa2211">||</span> <span class="n">bar</span><span class="p">);</span></pre></div></div></div>
<div style="margin: 8px 0; padding: 0 12px;"><p style="padding: 0; margin: 8px;">this is not "done", btw</p></div></div></div></div></div><br /><div><strong>REPOSITORY</strong><div><div>R116 Plasma Network Management Applet</div></div></div><br /><div><strong>REVISION DETAIL</strong><div><a href="https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093">https://phabricator.kde.org/D15093</a></div></div><br /><div><strong>To: </strong>andersonbruce, Plasma, jgrulich, pino<br /><strong>Cc: </strong>acrouthamel, K900, pino, lbeltrame, ngraham, plasma-devel, ragreen, Pitel, ZrenBot, lesliezhai, ali-mohamed, jensreuterberg, abetts, sebas, apol, mart<br /></div>