<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Corrected.<div><br clear="all"><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Thank you,<div>Pranam Lashkari</div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sat, Jan 26, 2019 at 6:23 PM Shlomi Fish <<a href="mailto:shlomif@shlomifish.org">shlomif@shlomifish.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">On Sat, 26 Jan 2019 00:37:30 +0530<br>
Pranam Lashkari <<a href="mailto:plashkari628@gmail.com" target="_blank">plashkari628@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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> ---------- Forwarded message ---------<br>
> From: Pranam Lashkari <<a href="mailto:plashkari628@gmail.com" target="_blank">plashkari628@gmail.com</a>><br>
> Date: Wed 23 Jan, 2019, 1:17 PM<br>
> Subject: GSoC 2019: Project Proposal for a New Game<br>
> To: <<a href="mailto:kde-devel@kde.org" target="_blank">kde-devel@kde.org</a>><br>
> <br>
> <br>
> Hello everyone,<br>
> I am Pranam Lashkari a computer engineering student from India. Recently I<br>
> mentored in GCI 2018 with KDE and successfully completed it. I successfully<br>
> completed my GSoC 2018 with Boost community. Where I developed a new<br>
> Astronomy Library.<br>
> <br>
> This year I would like to participate in GSoC with the KDE community. I<br>
> would like to propose a new game as a student. Details and proposal for the<br>
> game can be found here<br>
> <<a href="https://gist.github.com/lpranam/bc6a0cf595a83d58e3c8c3f0ac6b1c3e" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://gist.github.com/lpranam/bc6a0cf595a83d58e3c8c3f0ac6b1c3e</a>>. I am<br>
> open to all the suggestions, ideas and criticisms to make this game better.<br>
> <br>
> Thank you,<br>
> Pranam Lashkari<br>
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Hi Pranam!<br>
<br>
Some small corrections:<br>
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1. "dozons" should be <a href="https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/dozens" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/dozens</a> .<br>
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2. It is spelled <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qt_%28software%29" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qt_%28software%29</a><br>
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3. There should be spaces before the "("s.<br>
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Good luck!<br>
<br>
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