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<p style="margin-top: 0;">On March 4th, 2014, 11:02 a.m. UTC, <b>Alex Merry</b> wrote:</p>
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<td bgcolor="#fdfebc" width="50%"><pre style="font-size: 8pt; line-height: 140%; margin: 0; "><span class="n">KWindowSystem</span> <span class="n">provides</span> <span class="n">information</span> <span class="n">about</span> <span class="n">the</span> <span class="n"><span class="hl">state</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">of</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">the</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n">window</span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">manager</span></span> <span class="n">and</span></pre></td>
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<td bgcolor="#fdfebc" width="50%"><pre style="font-size: 8pt; line-height: 140%; margin: 0; "><span class="n">KWindowSystem</span> <span class="n">provides</span> <span class="n">information</span> <span class="n">about</span> <span class="n">the</span> <span class="n">window<span class="hl">ing</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">system</span></span> <span class="n">and</span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">allows</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">to</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="n"><span class="hl">interact</span></span><span class="hl"> </span><span class="k"><span class="hl">with</span></span></pre></td>
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<pre style="white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">"allows to interact with" is bad grammar; "allows interaction with" would work, and "allows <foo> to interact with" would be better. Maybe "clients" in place of <foo>?</pre>
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<p>On March 4th, 2014, 11:25 a.m. UTC, <b>Martin Gräßlin</b> wrote:</p>
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<pre style="white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">what are "clients"? It's obvious if one knows what the framework does, but if you don't know a client could be anything.</pre>
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<pre style="margin-left: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Other options could be "applications" or "programs". If you don't think any of them fit, and can't think of anything else, use the passive version ("allows interaction with").</pre>
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<p>On March 4th, 2014, 7:49 a.m. UTC, Martin Gräßlin wrote:</p>
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<div>Review request for KDE Frameworks.</div>
<div>By Martin Gräßlin.</div>
<p style="color: grey;"><i>Updated March 4, 2014, 7:49 a.m.</i></p>
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<b style="color: #575012; font-size: 10pt;">Repository: </b>
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<pre style="margin: 0; padding: 0; white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Improve the README</pre>
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