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<pre style="margin-left: 2em; white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Better:
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<p>On October 8th, 2010, 9:33 p.m., Jaime Torres wrote:</p>
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<div>Review request for kdelibs.</div>
<div>By Jaime Torres.</div>
<p style="color: grey;"><i>Updated 2010-10-08 21:33:00</i></p>
<h1 style="color: #575012; font-size: 10pt; margin-top: 1.5em;">Description </h1>
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* Is it wrote in correct English?
* Is it ok to list the modules in that way and in that page?
* In the KCM module Service Manager (from where I've copied the names and descriptions) there are 5 descriptions missing (also in the man page):
* KDED Subversion module
* KDED module for screen-managment
* Keyboard Daemon
* Display Managment change monitor
* K Remote Control Daemon
Please, non trivial descriptions?
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<h1 style="color: #575012; font-size: 10pt; margin-top: 1.5em;">Testing </h1>
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<pre style="margin: 0; padding: 0; white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">The man page is more complete, and now can search for out of space</pre>
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<a href="https://bugs.kde.org/show_bug.cgi?id=242582">242582</a>
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