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<pre style="white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">I think this should be 'Provides'. Maybe rephrase, I at least don't quite get what it means.</pre>
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<pre style="white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">'kio slave' is probably the correct term here, not 'protocol'. I don't know how technical we want to get here, though.</pre>
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<pre style="margin-left: 1em; white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Just typed from the description in system settings. Changed here.</pre>
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<pre style="white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Clarify, this sounds a bit strange.</pre>
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<pre style="white-space: pre-wrap; white-space: -moz-pre-wrap; white-space: -pre-wrap; white-space: -o-pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Maybe 'unmounts' instead of 'releases' ?
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<div>Review request for kdelibs.</div>
<div>By Jaime Torres.</div>
<p style="color: grey;"><i>Updated 2010-10-08 21:33:00</i></p>
<h1 style="color: #575012; font-size: 10pt; margin-top: 1.5em;">Description </h1>
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* Is it wrote in correct English?
* Is it ok to list the modules in that way and in that page?
* In the KCM module Service Manager (from where I've copied the names and descriptions) there are 5 descriptions missing (also in the man page):
* KDED Subversion module
* KDED module for screen-managment
* Keyboard Daemon
* Display Managment change monitor
* K Remote Control Daemon
Please, non trivial descriptions?
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